Games Night Gone Awry (M/M + MM/M)
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I’ve enjoyed every part of this story, and I’d love to learn more about whether or not the boys made this a normal part of their lives after this particular episode!
You write very well and I hope there’s more to follow in the future
You write very well and I hope there’s more to follow in the future
- george_bound
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Loved it, mate, every part of it! Hope we get to see more of their perils and Thomas's sadism
Absolutely wonderful! Glad to see those boys in their place! Hope to see more of these flatmates' adventures!
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I love the ending of this story. None of us will ever know for sure how long Thomas kept Alex and Oliver like that and what other punishments he gave them. But we can imagine.
You employed the "jumping back-and-forth in time"-feature really well. With it, you set the stage in the first chapter and you come back to that point later on. I was a bit sad though that you also used it to shorten the foot-sniffing part in the last chapter . The details in your story are nice, for example the speedos and ball gags that were colored alike. They help the reader to form a better picture in the mind.
You employed the "jumping back-and-forth in time"-feature really well. With it, you set the stage in the first chapter and you come back to that point later on. I was a bit sad though that you also used it to shorten the foot-sniffing part in the last chapter . The details in your story are nice, for example the speedos and ball gags that were colored alike. They help the reader to form a better picture in the mind.
Excellent !
- Michael-Colin
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Since you all commented, thought I'd just draw your attention to the semi-interactive sequel of this story if it interests you - https://tugstories.com/viewtopic.php?f=17&t=8583
Since you all commented, thought I'd just draw your attention to the semi-interactive sequel of this story if it interests you - https://tugstories.com/viewtopic.php?f=17&t=8583
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Link to story here - https://tugstories.com/viewtopic.php?f=17&t=7723
Link to story here - https://tugstories.com/viewtopic.php?f=17&t=7723
- george_bound
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Well I'm definitely gonna take a peek, thanks for the invite mate!
- Michael-Colin
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To those who followed this topic, the sequel to it is now completed 100%!
Ollie Gets Caught link - https://tugstories.com/viewtopic.php?f=17&t=8583
Ollie Gets Caught link - https://tugstories.com/viewtopic.php?f=17&t=8583
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Link to story here - https://tugstories.com/viewtopic.php?f=17&t=7723
Link to story here - https://tugstories.com/viewtopic.php?f=17&t=7723
Great story!
- Socksbound
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I love this story so much and the sequel as well
See all my written works here :
https://tugstories.com/viewtopic.php?p=38747#p38747
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https://tugstories.com/viewtopic.php?p=38747#p38747
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- MountainMan_91
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That was so enjoyable!
A great read!
Loved the back and forth style of story telling...
A great read!
Loved the back and forth style of story telling...
Learning new things each day...
A list of my work...
Nice story and the addition of speedo