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Chapter 143 – The Release

Tuesday, April 25 (1:30 PM)


I'm still not sure why this was such a huge thrill for me, but as soon as my cute buddy's freckled face disappeared beneath the giant wad on crumpled up Calvins, I nearly creamed my shorts.

The big ball of smelly Alpha-hunk underwear overwhelmed Jeremy's face and covered up his eyes, nose, forehead and cheeks. The poor kid had nowhere to go.


"Uuggh! Uggmmpphh...uugghhmmphhf!" he yelled, fighting his steel restraints and holding his breath to avoid breathing in through the cloth.



Jeremy fought and screamed and tried to buck me off, but his attempts to dislodge the cotton bundle I was pressing over his face, proved unsuccessful.

"Haha! Come on. Just breathe in." I laughed, pressing the smelly wad down and grabbing the struggling teen's hair to stop him from raising his head up off the mattress.


It's a good thing he had my socks crammed inside his yapper though, otherwise the neighbors would've probably heard him cursing and yelling from across the street!

His screaming didn't last very long.
The instant his nostrils flared open, he changed his tune.
And I knew exactly what he was going through.




Whatever smell...whatever musk his delicate senses had picked up, it made rather short work of his little temper tantrum.

PURE Alpha-male musk. That's what he'd sniffed.
And it wasn't just any Alpha-male either. This was the scent of a truly powerful one. A TOP male.



Little Jeremy could fight me. After all, he and I were equals.
But Nick...Nick was a completely different animal.
The cute nineteen-year-old was no match for the 6'4 blond muscle-hunk's giant boxers.

And so, the fight ended almost as soon as it began.


"Uhhhgggmpphf!" Jeremy cried out, his body tensing up and convulsing under the sheer potency of the musk he'd just sampled.

He must've known by now that the briefs he was sniffing weren't mine. But I decided to tell him anyways.

"Yeah, sniff Nick's big butt and balls." I laughed, practically creaming myself at the sight of the little guy becoming intimately acquainted with the smell of my boyfriend's unwashed boxers.


My prisoner's nostrils flared again, and a series of heavily muffled whimpers and cries made it out past the cumbersome sockgag.
Suddenly he wasn't being so feisty anymore.



Still, I kept the crumpled up pair of giant Calvins planted firmly over his face.
His overwhelmed senses and desperate screams and pleas made me feel sorta bad, but then I figured this was a fitting payback for what I'd been through yesterday afternoon.

I mean, yes...technically, Jeremy wasn't responsible for my encounter with Zack's raunchy socks and hockey gloves. Nick was the one responsible for that. But that was beside the point.
No matter what Jeremy had or hadn't done, Zack was HIS date.
I'd been forced to sniff up his hunky bodyguard's potent musk, so it was only fitting for him to sniff up MY bodyguard's raunchy man-stink as well.

Yeah, this was poetic justice at it's finest.
I'd suffered the smell of Zack. Now it was his turn to suffer the smell of Nick.
An eye for an eye, a tooth for a tooth.
And damn, what a fitting payback that was.

Nick's giant boxers really stank of balls and butt!




After a few more seconds of pressing the musky Calvin Klein undies over my friend's face, I finally climbed off his chest and resumed tickling his ribs, pits and nipples.

Jeremy ended up going stark crazy, and my relentless attacks were causing his very much erect boner to bob left and right inside the briefs I'd lent him.

"Uuuugghhmph! Ugggughhh! UUUGHHMPHF!" he screamed, tears streaming down his face, chest heaving up and down and fresh sweat coating his forehead and neck.


"Someone's certainly happy." I teased, pretending to suddenly notice the tremendously engorged boner my friend was dealing with.

The lad breathed in and out through his nostrils but averted his gaze and looked a little embarrassed at the fact that I'd made a comment about his hard-on.


"Ready for round two?" I asked, throwing the exhausted prisoner a devious smile and crawling down towards the foot of the bed.

"Ugghmph. Uggghmpf!" he angrily protested, craning his head up to see what I was doing and suddenly going into another fit as my intentions made themselves known.
Jeremy's attempts to escape were futile though, and in a matter of seconds I was sitting on his lower legs and pulling both of his socks off.


"Let's see how ticklish you really are." I mumbled, brushing my fingers against the soft skin under his left foot.

The gagged teen literally BURST into a wild giggling and curled his toes up in an effort to protect his hypersensitive soles.

This was heaven.



My plan was to take it slow, but the strength of his reaction caught me a little off guard and set things into motion a little faster than I'd initially anticipated.
My next move was a bold, double-handed attack. One hand for each foot.



Jeremy cried and screamed like there was no tomorrow. But even so, there was no getting around my socks.
The two lint-infested bundles I'd stuffed past his lips were muffling his screams out and packing his whole gob up quite nicely. No talking, no yelling and no calling for help.
The little prisoner was mine to do with as I pleased.


Spurred on by his muffled cries, I dug my fingers into his soles and aggressively explored the spaces between his plump little toes. All in all, I spent a good five minutes down there, tickling his feet, brushing my short fingernails against his soles and causing the lad to almost piss himself.



After a bit of taunting and teasing, I quickly stood up on the bed and plopped myself back down next to the young man's upper body before giving him a moment to recover.

I'd actually planned on keeping him cuffed to the bed like this for another hour, but I guess I sort of unintentionally cut the game short when I started digging my finger into his inner thighs.



I tickled his thighs for a few seconds, but as soon as I got close to his crotch, the little dude's angry boner started throbbing and squirting huge shots of warm semen all over the inside of his briefs.


I swear, I hadn't even touched his dick!



The instant I heard his panicked moans, I withdrew and watched as a wet patch grew to encompass the entire front of his boxers.

It must've been one big, gooey, sticky mess in there, I thought to myself as the kid moaned and cried out into his fat gag.


Holy shit! What had I done!?
My face tingled and suddenly I was the one feeling a little embarrassed.
I think we both were.

I'd been so caught up having fun, so enthralled by this little game of ours, that I accidently caused the kid to cream himself and ejaculate all over those briefs he was wearing.

Talk about a premature release...
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As a submissive, the scent of your alpha has this weird relaxing and mimd-numbing effect. The scent of someone ELSE alpha can be disorienting and incredibly overpowering.
Sidenote: as a ticklish sub, you really are sadistic. Being ticked SUCKS after a while.
Please sir... Not that again, I promise I’ll be good-

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Your chapters get better and better you are so sadistic with the last few chapters

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[mention]bondagefreak[/mention] I don't remember this bold streak from Steven from the first publishing of this story. I love it! The descriptions are gripping. Especially the use of Nick's scent on Jeremy is super erotic.

Really like seeing Steven's new side and then how he keeps justifying his revenge :lol: ...aka amateur dom :D

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Love the updates!

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i know the questions are month old but i'll answer them anyways
In your opinion, is Brad at all salvageable as person and as a Dom?
Yeah i guess (so) well it depends if he'll ever overcome his insecurities and low self esteem
Can his relationship with Jeremy be repaired and saved?
again it depends if jeremy would agree to see him again though i got a feeling jeremy would love to be in his masters arms again, it's still a 50/50 chance
What kind of relationship (if any) do you think Brad would be most suited to?
i don't really know but i do remember reading that he likes using force and seeing reactions from his subs, jeremy is already compliant so that whole punishing thing of his won't work at all. obviously the most suited sub for him is a rebellious one
If you had the chance, would you go back in time and take Jeremy's place in an attempt to change Brad for the better? If so, what would you have done differently?
i honestly don't know how to change him for the better and clearly he won't listen to someone who's smaller than him (im only standing at 5'0 FYI) but if i would take jeremy's place you say he would definitely get an earful from me, i talk/fight back when someone treats me like crap im not saying that i could change him for the better by doing that but i just want him to hear me out
If you could choose THREE words to describe Brad, what would they be?
Scary, Brutal, Brawny

im still reading chapters 137-142 so yeah just to let you know sir [mention]bondagefreak[/mention] im still following this story :D

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I don't like to be tickled but it seems Jeremy does! Steven should be proud of himself for making Jeremy cream his undies. I'm looking forward to reading the next chapter, as I'm sure Jeremy will take revenge on Steven.

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Note from the author: This chapter marks the final installment of Bound And Gagged In A Sleeping Bag: Part IV


Chapter 144 – Brad's Far-Reaching Grasp

Tuesday, April 25 (2:00 PM)


Jeremy's premature ejaculation put a bit of a damper on the feel-good atmosphere we'd built up so far.
I think both of us felt a bit awkward about what had just happened.
I hadn't really intended on things going this far and from the looks of it, neither had Jeremy.

But there he was, stretched out on my boyfriend's king size bed with a big puddle of hot semen soaking up the front of his briefs.



I quickly grabbed the handcuff keys from the bedside cabinet and got to work uncuffing my friend's ankles.
A series of clicks echoed across the room, until finally the cuffs were off and a moan of relief escaped from the kid's heavily obstructed mouth.


"You okay?" I asked, crawling up to my were my captive's head was resting and scanning his face for any signs of anger or disappointment.


His features were hard to read, and his wordy complaints were too muffled up to comprehend.
"Ugghmmph...ugghmmphh. Ughhmmph!" he answered, futilely trying to slip a word out past the dirty old ankle socks I'd crammed into his mouth.


"You sure you don't wanna stay cuffed like this for another hour?" I asked, brushing my fingers against the lad's vulnerable left armpit and instantly causing him to squeal and break out into a fit of laughter.

I chuckled, but as soon as the tickling ended, a set of angry green eyes glared up at me.


"Alright, alright. Just calm down." I laughed, reaching down to yank the tape off my prisoner's lips.

To my surprise, the extremely wide adhesive layer wasn't coming off.
At least, not as easily as I thought it would!

I used my fingers to try and find a weak point, but even the edges and corners were fused to the young man's pale skin.


"Uggghmm...mmphh. Uggghhffmmhhgg." Jeremy tried telling me, from under his fat sockgag.
I knew he wanted me to uncuff his hands from the bedframe, and although I wanted to be the one to peel the tape off his lips, I decided to comply with his wishes and promptly got to work uncuffing him.




It took two whole minutes to get the large strip of tape off his face, and we ended up having to use warm water and dish soap to get it done.

I have to admit, when the tape started coming off, I got a huge kick out of seeing my big bundle of dirty socks packed tight inside my friend's bulging lips.

He tried spitting them out, but part of the tape was still holding fast, keeping the mighty wad in it's place.
Poor Jeremy huffed and puffed in frustration as I applied more soapy water to his cheeks and face.
I had to work hard to supress an amused smile from forming over my lips.



The tape came off, and the lad lost no time in lowering his head down over the kitchen sink and freeing himself of the foot-flavoured mouth-plug I'd imposed on him.

I gave my friend a pat on the back and rubbed his shoulder blades while he rinsed his face off and tried to wash away the legacy my socks had left in his mouth. In other words; lint, hairs and a few other bits and bobs.





Jeremy changed into some clean underwear and put his shorts, t-shirt and socks back on.
We spoke for a bit and ended up agreeing not to use the crazy ass mysterious tape anymore.
Considering how well it had glued itself to the young man's skin, I could only imagine how painful it would be to remove if it got into my neck or leg hairs.


Jeremy ordered me to the bedroom and ran down to the basement after instructing me to strip to my undies and wait for him on the bed.

I promptly complied and nervously readjusted my tight boxer-briefs a little, hoping to conceal the angry erection that insisted on raging on in there.




My young captor was back in less than a minute, this time with a roll of wider-than-average electrical tape in his hands.

When he told me he was gonna put the crazy green tape back in it's place and choose something else, I was almost certain he'd come back with one of Nick's jumbo rolls of extra wide, heavy duty duct tape. So I was a little disappointed to see the green eyed lad walk into the bedroom, holding a deceptively small roll of stretchy black tape instead.




And so, Jeremy cuffed me to the bed frame in the exact same manner I'd cuffed him earlier.
Arms stretched above my head and feet stretched down towards the foot of the bed.
Even though I was a few centimeters taller than my captor, my limbs were still stretched out painfully tight, leaving my pits, ribs and stomach completely exposed and defenseless.


The cute nineteen year old ended up tickling the crap out of me!

I was shaking and laughing uncontrollably as my feet, pits, ribs, neck, crotch and inner thighs came under attack.
To his credit, Jeremy was even more sadistic than I thought he'd be.
He was relentless, and there was literally nothing I could do to protect my soles and pits from his curious fingers.

I was stretched out, cuffed down, exposed and going nowhere.


I nearly blew my load when the devilish twerp dug his fingers into my inner thighs and tickled my bulging crotch.
My thighs tingled in excitement, but the little twink stopped when he realized I was about to jizz myself.

I laughed, yelled and cursed at him, secretly hoping he'd feed me my gag and tape my mouth shut.
I was a bit disappointed when he ignored my screams and just continued tickling me.




By the time he stopped to give me a break, I was sweating, grunting and breathing heavily.


"Hey, d'you mind if I check something out on Pornhub?" he asked, placing a hand on my heaving chest and waiting for me to give him the password to my laptop.

Thinking this was a game and fearing what might happen if I didn't comply, I quickly surrendered my laptop by giving him the login code.

I thought he'd be disappointed at my compliance, but from the look on his face, he wasn't.
The lad simply thanked me and told me he'd be back in a few minutes with some new ideas on what to do with me.

As much as it frightened me, I actually really liked the sound of that.
The threat of new and improved torments immediately caused my dick to throb with renewed energy.

"Aww fuck no." I growled, fighting my restraints to make him believe I wanted to escape.

I was practically begging for a gag, but Jeremy just laughed and crawled off the bed before walking into the living room, where I'd left my laptop.


Things started turning sour real fast after that.





Unable to free my hands and reach for my throbbing erection, I was left there, cuffed to the bed, sweaty and frustrated.

Jeremy came back in the room about fifteen minutes later, but the expression on his face wasn't one of joy or excitement. I could immediately tell that something was wrong.



"Why didn't you tell me Nick had gone to get my stuff?" the kid angrily blurted out, looking a little pale and flustered.

I looked at him wide eyed, more than a little taken aback by the nature of his question.
"Uh...what stuff?" I asked, in a shaky, less-than-convincing voice.
I tried pretending not to know what he was talking about, but for some reason, Jeremy wasn't biting.

I hadn't seen him go in Nick's closet. So how could he possibly...wait. Oh god, no.


"Brad just told me Nick already has all my stuff!" Jeremy snapped, standing next to the bed and looking really upset.

Of course!
How could I be so STUPID?!
He hadn't been browsing Pornhub! He'd been chatting with Brad!


"Jer. Calm down. I can explain." I tried telling him. But the kid wasn't interested.

"Where did you guys put my stuff?!" he pressed, looking down at me with a set of angry green eyes and completely ignoring my attempts at smooth-talking my way out of this predicament.


I was tempted to act as though I didn't know, but for some reason I felt as though my fellow sub would see right through my lies. And truth be known, I was a bad liar.

"In the closet." I finally answered, allowing a brief moment of silence to pass.


Jeremy immediately went for the closet and angrily swung the door open.
It took him a while to find his belongings, but he eventually did.


"I'm sorry. I wasn't allowed to tell you." I told him, trying to defend myself. "Nick was planning on telling you himself. He...he just didn't want you thinking about your old life for a few days."


The boy looked at me with a deep scowl across his handsome face.
But instead of accepting my apology, he glared at me and stormed out of the room without a word.

"No! Come on man, let me go. I can explain! Jeremy! Jeremy, wait!" I pleaded, rattling the cuffs that kept me restrained to the bed frame.

Shit!


The angry teen ignored me and made his way back to the living room...probably so that he could resume chatting with his former Master.

I was freaking out, thinking about all the things the prick must've been telling my friend.
Had I known about Jeremy's intent to reconnect with Brad, I would've never given him the password to my laptop.





Jeremy came back in the room a full half an hour later, and this time he was wearing his own clothes.

The angry look on his face was gone and was instead replaced with an expression of solemn resolve.
I thought maybe he'd gotten over the fact that Nick and I had concealed the truth from him.
But when I tried to get him to talk, he said nothing.


The young man just walked up to the bed and grabbed the roll of black electrical tape before climbing next to me, on top of the mattress.

"Wait...what are you doing?" I asked, a little frightened by the strange way in which he was acting.
At first I thought he was gonna resume playing with me, but his facial expression was just too blank and too cold.
Something wasn't right.


The nineteen year old remained dead silent.
He simply climbed on top of me, straddled my upper chest, and reached down to grab Nick's huge Calvin Klein boxers.

"Haha. Ok, come on Jer. You have to let me go. Nick's gonna be home soon and I have to get the summmpphh!" I cried out, suddenly finding myself with a big wad in my mouth.


"You're not going anywhere." came Jeremy's cold answer.


I was terrified.
There was no remorse in his eyes. No pity.


"Uugghhmmm!" I protested, desperately wanting to explain our reasons for keeping him in the dark.
I wanted to tell him that I was innocent. I wanted to tell him that it was all Nick and Zack's idea. But I never got the chance to explain myself.

Jeremy didn't give flying fuck about my excuses and just crammed the enormous wad of smelly Calvins inside my protesting orifice.


"Uuugghmmm! Mmpphhff...ugghmmmph!" I cried out, gagging and choking on my own boyfriend's enormous boxers.


The smell that assaulted my nostrils was unmistakeable.
It smelled of Nick. Or rather, it smelled of his huge cock and heavy nutsack.



Surprisingly strong fingers continued cramming more and more cloth into my mouth, filling up every nook and cranny and leaving virtually no space unoccupied.

I cried out and gave my friend a pleading look, but he ignored me and pressed the massive wad of smelly boxers down over my gaping mouth and flaring nostrils.



I looked on as my determined captor used his free hand to bring the roll of tape up to his mouth, and watched as he used his teeth to peel open the end of the adhesive material.


My head was roughly yanked up off the mattress and I felt something sticky latch itself onto the back of my neck.

Before I knew it, Jeremy was wrapping layer after layer of black electrical tape around my head, completely smothering my face under the massive wad that was left protruding from my mouth.

I fought and screamed, but the stupid boxers filled my mouth and threatened to clog up my throat.



Jeremy didn't stop.
He continued wrapping more and more tape around my head, seven, eight, nine times...until I finally I stopped counting.


After what seemed like a whole minute, the kid severed the electric tape and tossed it to the bed before getting up and leaving the bedroom.




Several minutes passed...ten, fifteen maybe.

I heard a bit of noise from outside the bedroom, heard some scuffling about, but couldn't quite make out what he was doing.


It's only when he entered the bedroom a second time that I understood what was happening.

The young man walked in, his bags of clothing in tow.
This time he had a sad, almost apologetic look about him.


He walked up to me and tightened his lips a little before letting out a discouraged sigh.
"I'm sorry, Steven. You've been a good friend. But I can't stay here....I have to go." he spoke, giving me one final, parting glance.


"Mgghpph...dfffttggguuhhg." I cried out, desperately trying to negotiate through the monstrous gag the young man had stuffed down my mouth.
There was so much he needed to hear, so much I wanted to tell him!


I could tell from Jeremy's face that this wasn't the way he expected us to part company.
But he couldn't afford to wait.
I'd given him an opening and he was gonna take it, even at the expense of our friendship.



The handsome green eyed lad cast his gaze down and turned around before slowly walking out of the bedroom.


I screamed and yelled for him to come back, but Nick's enormous boxers muffled my cries out.
I saw my friend walk away holding the two plastic bags that contained all his belongings.

I heard the front door open, then heard it close.

Then nothing.
Only silence.




Moments passed, but still...no noise could be heard.

I was alone.


It took a while for it to dawn upon me, but in nothing less than the blink of an eye, little Jeremy had vanished from our lives.


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Well....I thinks Steven is in a little bit of a pickle.....Nick and Zack are going to be really pissed....I wonder if they will see the need to punish him :roll:

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I feel a little sad at how Jeremy is leaving. Sad because he isn't able to see the good intentions with which Nick and Zack made these plans and got his stuff. :(

Steven's naivety got the better of him. He couldn't possibly foresee what Jeremy was going to do with the laptop. I hope Nick will come home soon and free Steven. And I hope things will get better soon because I think the friendship between Steven and Jeremy is too strong to get lost now.

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This is some heavy mood whiplash here. I didn't follow the original story, so it's quite a shock to me.

While the more lighthearted parts of the chapter were quite fun (and to be honest, hot), I can't but help feel sorry about Jeremy upon rereading. And Steven, explaining the whole thing to Nick won't be easy.

All in all, this chapter was one of the most hard-hitting ones and made me feel genuinely upset. I can't help but admire your top-notch writing. Great job.
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We still know nothing about what Brad allegedly did except from Nick and Zack. Jeremy has every right to be pissed, let's see what'll happen next.

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I loved when jeremy shoved Nick's underwear in Steven's mouth

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I'm finally up to date with this story! And it seems that I came at a great time, I remember that this was one of the last chapters that I read in the old forum, it seems that we are finally getting to unexplored places 8-)

I will take the opportunity to respond to the poll:
In your opinion, is Brad at all salvageable as person and as a Dom?
Yes, Brad has only to learn to deal with his emotions, and to know that he also has duties as a Dom
Can his relationship with Jeremy be repaired and saved?
In my opinion the relationship of the two still has salvation, especially because Jeremy still likes his old Dom, however, this would have to take time, Brad has to change a lot for this to work out
What kind of relationship (if any) do you think Brad would be most suited to?
Brad has a lot to learn, so a sub with a fighting spirit who knows how to set limits would be a good start for him
If you had the chance, would you go back in time and take Jeremy's place in an attempt to change Brad for the better? If so, what would you have done differently?
Brad has many things to learn on his own, but I would go back, I would try to change that overly aggressive spirit of Brad
If you could choose THREE words to describe Brad, what would they be?
Immature, Sadistic and Egocentric
Yes, it's me in the picture. What are you waiting for to tie me up and gag me?

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Nooo Jeremy. How could you leave Zack to go back to Brad? I would never.

Poor Steven. He is in for a lot worse than having Nick's nasty briefs stuffed in his mouth after Nick and Zack find out that he stupidly allowed Jeremy to tie him up and escape. He is going to be punished, and maybe not even the fun kind :(

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Just finished reading. Interesting end to the part. If you're looking for a little teaser I think something from Brad's POV on this whole thing would be interesting... Just a suggestion.

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I'm gonna give everyone a bit of time to catch up before moving on to the fifth part of Steven's adventure.

Feedback is always welcome and I look forward to hearing from more of our 1st time readers over the coming days.
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FInally catching up again, and oh boooy, we're back where we left off nearly... Jeremy leaving Steven and running off to rejoin Brad, I still hesitate to know what's driving him to do such a thing, what sort of hold Brad seems to have to convince him to come back there even after this. Maybe he's just seen a side of Brad we haven't yet because of Steven, but honestly I'm no sure even that's enough. I really hope for his sake that things are straightened out in a better way, though him and Steven having fun was still super cute while it lasted, especially how effective Steven's socks were, even if they aren't likely even Brad-level of stick, let alone Nick and Shawn (who I hope shows up again at some point! I love Zach too, don't get me wrong, Shawn is just a fun curiosity to get to know more about, same for Brad when we get back there.)

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Great update again. Looking forward to Part V

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lengban wrote:
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...though him and Steven having fun was still super cute while it lasted, especially how effective Steven's socks were.
Yup, I'll admit I had a lot of fun with the Steven-dominating-Jeremy part.
That scene had a very different feel to it and was probably one of the most lighthearted, playful scenes I've ever written.

And yeah, Steven's socks were pretty effective weren't they?
Jeremy wasn't able to get a single word out after getting his mouth stuffed with both of Steven's cotton wads.
That crazy sticky mystery-tape kept his lips sealed shut and those socks were damn effective at stopping him from calling for help. Haha, almost makes you wanna jump in the scene and join them, doesn't it?

I'm glad that you guys enjoyed the scene so much.
I did as well.

And don't you worry about Shawn.
I've got big plans for him in the upcoming part.

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Up to chapter 8 so far, and had to comment. The understanding of sub\dom dynamics is friggin great, and so far chapter 8, with that tender moment, and Nick discovering his attraction to the smell of his friend's foot is a big highlight.
I could go on, but I have quite a bit to catch up on. Nice job, boss.

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bondagefreak wrote:
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...I've got big plans for him in the upcoming part.
Heeee, super excited to see that! As for joining them, gosh, not sure how I'd even wanna go about that. I personally would feel third-wheel like with that sort of closed friend dynamic and knowing the fragile state that Jeremy is in, but at the same time the idea of getting to watch Steven torture someone on his own with his own rank socks was super hot and made me giggle at the idea and semi-want more.

But the idea of Shawn coming back for more is super exciting, I'm excited as heck to see what happens next!

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Question for the readers:
WOULD YOU RATHER: PLAY STEVEN'S ROLE IN THIS SCENE AND HAVE JEREMY TIGHTLY SPREAD OUT TO THE BED, GAGGED WITH YOUR SOCKS AND READY TO BE PLAYED WITH?
OR, WOULD YOU RATHER: PLAY JEREMY'S ROLE FOR THIS SCENE AND BE SHACKLED TO THE BED WITH STEVEN'S SOCKS STUFFED IN YOUR MOUTH?
Jeremy, even though Nick's underwear is putrid it's still way more better than his mouldy socks

Chapters 137 were really good especially the double date thing

I've finally finished reading chapter 144 and i really liked this chapter so much, got me on the edge of my seat. as i read the part where Jeremy asks for Steven's password i knew Jeremy's was planning on doing something i don't why Steven didn't even think of that i mean they already watch some "videos" before they started tying each other right? but anyways im so excited for the next chapter this is so good

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Awesome rebound in the last chapter, ideal cliffhanger to end this part. And I didn't see it coming, so, well done!

The chapters before hold sweet moments and interesting details for someone (like me) who's not into such "defined" mindset like describing himself as dom or sub, and they worked wonders in building a feeling of normality so you don't see the end coming...
Loved how the two subs - well, not that much, it would seem - experiment like kids as soon as they're left alone and not so naively surf on the ridge between play and easy cruelty. Just like you said: boys will be boys :D

(BTW: I admit I kinda didn't pay much attention your titles so far, but will from now on...)

Made me dream about a possible Brad comeback.
A free, gratuitous "LK in Jeremy's body" parallel storyline: call Brad and tell him to drive by Nick's and collect both his preferred preys... An alternate solution for their doomed couple and classic self-defense move for underdogs: create a new rung UNDER the -previously- lower rung of the ladder... And impress your master by venting out your accumulated frustration in a deluge of inventive torments.
PS: would you fancy such an exercise, like a story request?

So thrilled about the future of this story now - but I promise not to complain if you take a summer break, at least I'll be able to draw a thing or two before you start again... :roll:
don't run ! I'm friendly ...

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Thanks for the comments guys, glad more of your are catching up.
The saga will be resuming next week.

A lot of you are enjoying my new short story "ETHAN'S SWEET REVENGE"
I'd also like to let you know I've published another project called "WRONG TIME, WRONG PLACE"
Pretty sure you guys are gonna enjoy this one as well ;)

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