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Re: Tales in Briloven (mm/F, m/f, mmm/fF, F/mm, F/F, m/m and more), Chapter 8 - Spy Game (F/m)

Posted: Mon Oct 10, 2022 9:47 pm
by tieupfan
Great chapter! Can't wait for what's next!

Re: Tales in Briloven (mm/F, m/f, mmm/fF, F/mm, F/F, m/m and more), Chapter 8 - Spy Game (F/m)

Posted: Wed Oct 12, 2022 12:05 am
by harveygasson
Brilliant new post

Re: Tales in Briloven (mm/F, m/f, mmm/fF, F/mm, F/F, m/m and more), Chapter 8 - Spy Game (F/m)

Posted: Mon Oct 17, 2022 2:45 am
by charliesmith
GreyLord wrote: 1 year ago It is very good to see you continue this tale, @charliesmith. It will be nice to have Laura get tied up again. She really needs a boy friend to take care of these things, doesn't she? Good work!
Interesting idea. ;) [mention]GreyLord[/mention]

Thank you [mention]slackywacky[/mention] [mention]Mommy's Naughty Boy[/mention] [mention]tieupfan[/mention] [mention]harveygasson[/mention]

Re: Tales in Briloven (mm/F, m/f, mmm/fF, F/mm, F/F, m/m and more), Chapter 8 - Spy Game (F/m)

Posted: Mon Oct 17, 2022 10:04 pm
by Mask6190
Just caught up with the story. Great Job charliesmith!

Re: Tales in Briloven (mm/F, m/f, mmm/fF, F/mm, F/F, m/m and more), Chapter 8 - Spy Game (F/m)

Posted: Thu Nov 03, 2022 3:14 pm
by jafib
Just read the first page so far, so I don't know if anybody mentioned it in the meantime, but the irregular switching between past and present tense can be quite irritating. Choose one and stick to it ;)

Either way, starting out interestingly :)

Re: Tales in Briloven (mm/F, m/f, mmm/fF, F/mm, F/F, m/m and more), Chapter 8 - Spy Game (F/m)

Posted: Sun Mar 12, 2023 9:05 am
by ninterz
I really liked the story.
Too bad it war just left as it is