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Rebecca surely regrets her decision by now Hmmm ... and what will the big white ball be used for? Good second part, the twins enjoy that too much
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The update made it even better. Great story.
p.s. you might want to change this line: "At this point, I knew I wasn’t going to get loose until my daughter came back from the store."
p.s. you might want to change this line: "At this point, I knew I wasn’t going to get loose until my daughter came back from the store."
Thanks for reading. Feel free to comment.
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Absolutely! How Rebecca fights, how the twins react? Beautifully told!
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Very well written, descriptions of bondage and feelings of the protagonist. Excellent.
Sometimes gagged, sometimes blindfold. Always barefoot.
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Aunty ups the anti. I rather hope this effort proves futile and things get worse for Rebecca.
This story gets better - with every part! The Interaction between the characters is great. And a nice Ending! I wonder though, if Rebeccas Initiative pays off If not, then the twins will resort to more stringent measures. I wonder, if Rebecca has a plan It is a very impressive story - interessting characters! I wonder, if the twins know any bounds ....the line serms thin.
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And I wouldn't mind, if Rebecca loses her Slippers and the tickling goes on
This part was different. No bondage. But that did not hurt. We learned a lot about Rebecca. The Dialogue between aunt and nice was very well scripted. Rebecca is ressourceful and clever. I enjoyed that she striked back. Indeed the game is on another Level now. The Characters are very interessting. Great work! And I'm curious what happens next!!!
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great story. you are a great writer. can't wait to read the next part.
And I like the Idea of a Hunt The Twins hunting Rebecca sounds like fun! I wonder how long the twins will need to "capture" their prey
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This is working really well NoOne - describing the mix of emotions, thoughts, physical feelings.
Am hoping this continues and there's more positions that Rebecca ends up in!
Am hoping this continues and there's more positions that Rebecca ends up in!
I wonder how long the twins need, to hunt Rebecca down - and what punishment will follow
I'm sooo thrilled, it will be fun, when the Twins will hunt Rebecca
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Wow! How could I have missed this story! Well done! Hope you continue!
So glad, you are back !! A blockade must be horrible. Good luck!
So Rebecca got caught soon - the Trap of the twins was clever.
Now Rebecca will have to pay the price. The twins really do deserve some taste of their own medicine at some point
So Rebecca got caught soon - the Trap of the twins was clever.
Now Rebecca will have to pay the price. The twins really do deserve some taste of their own medicine at some point
I understand your problem But there may be a solution: The Twins seem to hold all the aces, true. They are very full of themselves. And here may be a chance for Rebecca at some point. Confidence itself is a good thing, but becoming overconfident is a weakness, the twins underestimated Rebecca once, Why not again?
Another idea: The Introduction of new a character? Or Rebeccas Sister returns prematurely?
Just thinking
Another idea: The Introduction of new a character? Or Rebeccas Sister returns prematurely?
Just thinking
Further on: The Twins may develop more Empathy, and strike some Deal with Rebecca, or thex turn on each other?