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Posted: Thu Dec 28, 2023 11:02 am
by RopeBunny
If you've found your way here, I'm currently doing a rewrite.

The new Lupin shall appear soon.

Re: Lupin House (Redux) (F+/F+) *NEW 28/12*

Posted: Thu Dec 28, 2023 11:02 am
by RopeBunny
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Posted: Thu Dec 28, 2023 11:03 am
by RopeBunny
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Posted: Thu Dec 28, 2023 11:03 am
by RopeBunny
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Re: Lupin House (Redux) (F+/F+) *NEW 28/12*

Posted: Thu Dec 28, 2023 11:07 am
by Caesar73
Do please continue @RopeBunny - the Entry Chapters are intruiging - and since I don´t know the first attempt - I read it with fresh eyes :)

Re: Lupin House (Redux) (F+/F+) *NEW 28/12*

Posted: Thu Dec 28, 2023 11:11 am
by RopeBunny
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Re: Lupin House (Redux) (F+/F+) *NEW 28/12*

Posted: Thu Dec 28, 2023 11:51 am
by Caesar73
RopeBunny wrote: 5 months ago
Well, a quick reply deserves an equally quick response. Since I'm still online :D
Thank you :)

Re: Lupin House (Redux) (F+/F+) *NEW 28/12*

Posted: Sun Dec 31, 2023 12:50 am
by RopeBunny
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Posted: Sun Dec 31, 2023 12:50 am
by RopeBunny
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Re: Lupin House (Redux) (F+/F+) *CHAPTERS ADDED 31st December*

Posted: Sun Dec 31, 2023 5:48 am
by BlissfulMisery
Am glad to see a continuation of sorts - the previous story ended suddenly on a bit of a cliffhanger with no real resolution. Obviously I do not expect the new story to directly address that, but I thought it was a nice concept that could use further exploration.
RopeBunny wrote: 5 months ago tap that dreadful Swedish place for furniture.
:lol:

I also really like the excerpt from the article you included - a great way to provide backstory in an engaging way.

And it seems things are kicking off quite quickly on the second part... Lucille playing matchmaker perhaps? :P

Honestly both of them took the whole thing very much in stride. Then again, what is one to do when living in a haunted house? :)

Excited to see what new (or possibly old) direction you end up taking this 'reboot'!

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Caesar73 wrote: 5 months ago and since I don´t know the first attempt - I read it with fresh eyes
Actually you have read and commented on the previous version of this story (I had to double check to make sure I was not going crazy, but there it was: viewtopic.php?f=8&t=18556&start=50).

But if you have forgotten, well, it just means more surprises for you I suppose :)

Re: Lupin House (Redux) (F+/F+) *CHAPTERS ADDED 31st December*

Posted: Mon Jan 01, 2024 9:48 am
by Bigballgag1
Like @Caesar73 I was not too familiar with the original. However this has been a really impressive read so far.

I like the style of writing and there are so many twists and turns this could take. The excerpts with the backstory too provide a lot of background information without it becoming a book in itself.

Looking forward to the next part and finding out more about this kinky haunted house. Nicely done! :)

Re: Lupin House (Redux) (F+/F+) *CHAPTERS ADDED 31st December*

Posted: Wed Jan 03, 2024 6:12 pm
by RopeBunny
BlissfulMisery wrote: 5 months ago Obviously I do not expect the new story to directly address that, but I thought it was a nice concept that could use further exploration.
And it won't, this is a start from scratch using some of what I wrote before, but twisted into a new thing.
BlissfulMisery wrote: 5 months ago
Excited to see what new (or possibly old) direction you end up taking this 'reboot'!
Bigballgag1 wrote: 5 months ago
Looking forward to the next part and finding out more about this kinky haunted house. Nicely done! :)
Thank you both, next chapters below.

Re: Lupin House (Redux) (F+/F+) *CHAPTERS ADDED 31st December*

Posted: Wed Jan 03, 2024 6:12 pm
by RopeBunny
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Posted: Wed Jan 03, 2024 6:13 pm
by RopeBunny
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by RopeBunny
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Re: Lupin House (Redux) (F+/F+) *NEW CHAPTERS 03/01*

Posted: Fri Jan 05, 2024 8:00 am
by BlissfulMisery
I am really enjoying the partial return of the 'documentary/found footage style' in the intermissions.

And it seems Lucille is not done with her 'victim'. Wonder if she will force the issue - or if she has a different game in mind.

Re: Lupin House (Redux) (F+/F+) *NEW CHAPTERS 03/01*

Posted: Sun Jan 07, 2024 1:39 pm
by RopeBunny
BlissfulMisery wrote: 5 months ago I am really enjoying the partial return of the 'documentary/found footage style' in the intermissions.
It's a style I enjoy. Not just the 'found footage/video' stuff but the general story theme of breaking chapters up with passages from books or message exchanges/phonecalls. It's my new favourite way to write :D

As for Lucille, more below, soon.

Re: Lupin House (Redux) (F+/F+) *NEW CHAPTERS 03/01*

Posted: Tue Jan 09, 2024 10:51 pm
by RopeBunny
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Posted: Tue Jan 09, 2024 10:52 pm
by RopeBunny
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Posted: Tue Jan 09, 2024 10:53 pm
by RopeBunny
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Re: Lupin House (Redux) (F+/F+) *NEW 09/01*

Posted: Wed Jan 10, 2024 5:59 am
by BlissfulMisery
Well I suppose it is 'unintentional matchmaker' then for Lucille!

The disjointed 'ghost logic' is interesting to follow too - it was present in the previous story of course, but it does nicely explain her erratic behavior.

Although interesting that she used El's equipment - no magical ghost ropes.

Waste not, want not, I suppose.

And it is a little amusing how both El and Sal really want to be the one tied up. Well, at least they are now roughly on the same page - I suppose being forced to interact and actually communicating helps!

But at this rate they will be asking Lucille to tie them both up together :lol:

Re: Lupin House (Redux) (F+/F+) *NEW 09/01*

Posted: Fri Jan 12, 2024 3:06 pm
by RopeBunny
BlissfulMisery wrote: 4 months ago
And it is a little amusing how both El and Sal really want to be the one tied up. Well, at least they are now roughly on the same page - I suppose being forced to interact and actually communicating helps!

But at this rate they will be asking Lucille to tie them both up together :lol:
:lol: That's just me dithering and changing my mind mid write, not sure of who I want to focus on and coming up with one idea following another regarding how to play it out.

Re: Lupin House (Redux) (F+/F+) *NEW 09/01*

Posted: Fri Jan 12, 2024 3:08 pm
by RopeBunny
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Re: Lupin House (Redux) (F+/F+) *paused*

Posted: Fri Jan 12, 2024 4:22 pm
by Caesar73
Take your time! Looking forward to it :)

Re: Lupin House (Redux) (F+/F+) *NEW 09/01*

Posted: Sun Jan 14, 2024 6:17 am
by BlissfulMisery
RopeBunny wrote: 4 months ago
:lol: That's just me dithering and changing my mind mid write, not sure of who I want to focus on and coming up with one idea following another regarding how to play it out.
:lol: Fair enough.
RopeBunny wrote: 4 months ago Am pausing.

Not abandoning.

The story here. I've another idea which is managing to steal all my writing attention, posting soon no doubt.
Seems Lucille can just never catch a break when it comes to getting her chance in the spotlight :P

But I understand the feeling of getting caught up in a new/different idea - better to let the river sweep you away then to try and fight the current.
RopeBunny wrote: 4 months ago And. Well. I'm always going to write what I enjoy
Always a wise move :)