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Re: Games Night Gone Awry (M/M + MM/M)
Posted: Wed Jun 17, 2020 1:00 am
by ziptiedboy
I’ve enjoyed every part of this story, and I’d love to learn more about whether or not the boys made this a normal part of their lives after this particular episode!
You write very well and I hope there’s more to follow in the future
Re: Games Night Gone Awry (M/M + MM/M)
Posted: Wed Jun 17, 2020 2:49 am
by george_bound
Loved it, mate, every part of it! Hope we get to see more of their perils and Thomas's sadism
Re: Games Night Gone Awry (M/M + MM/M)
Posted: Wed Jun 17, 2020 4:24 am
by Volobond
Absolutely wonderful! Glad to see those boys in their place! Hope to see more of these flatmates' adventures!
Re: Games Night Gone Awry (M/M + MM/M)
Posted: Wed Jun 17, 2020 1:47 pm
by Sniffmyfeet
I love the ending of this story. None of us will ever know for sure how long Thomas kept Alex and Oliver like that and what other punishments he gave them. But we can imagine.
You employed the "jumping back-and-forth in time"-feature really well. With it, you set the stage in the first chapter and you come back to that point later on. I was a bit sad though that you also used it to shorten the foot-sniffing part in the last chapter
. The details in your story are nice, for example the speedos and ball gags that were colored alike. They help the reader to form a better picture in the mind.
Re: Games Night Gone Awry (M/M + MM/M)
Posted: Fri Jun 19, 2020 11:29 pm
by Mummyboi
Excellent !
Re: Games Night Gone Awry (M/M + MM/M)
Posted: Mon Jul 27, 2020 12:17 am
by Michael-Colin
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Since you all commented, thought I'd just draw your attention to the semi-interactive sequel of this story if it interests you -
https://tugstories.com/viewtopic.php?f=17&t=8583
Re: Games Night Gone Awry (M/M + MM/M)
Posted: Mon Jul 27, 2020 12:28 am
by george_bound
Well I'm definitely gonna take a peek, thanks for the invite mate!
Re: Games Night Gone Awry (M/M + MM/M)
Posted: Sat Aug 29, 2020 11:37 am
by Michael-Colin
To those who followed this topic, the sequel to it is now completed 100%!
Ollie Gets Caught link -
https://tugstories.com/viewtopic.php?f=17&t=8583
Re: Games Night Gone Awry (M/M + MM/M)
Posted: Tue Sep 22, 2020 6:21 am
by TiedNW
Great story!
Re: Games Night Gone Awry (M/M + MM/M)
Posted: Tue Sep 22, 2020 8:05 am
by Socksbound
I love this story so much and the sequel as well
Re: Games Night Gone Awry (M/M + MM/M)
Posted: Mon Oct 05, 2020 9:47 am
by MountainMan_91
That was so enjoyable!
A great read!
Loved the back and forth style of story telling...
Re: Games Night Gone Awry (M/M + MM/M)
Posted: Wed Nov 25, 2020 2:04 am
by szlm1515
Nice story and the addition of speedo
