Stories of Tie Up Games

Can't say I've had feelings towards roller coaster safety restraints, but I do like the idea of combining the thrill of bondage with the thrill of rushing through the air. I've even looked to see if there was any kind of "acrophobia" fetish. Didn't find anything, but it's still an intrigui...

I like this way that even though the two protagonists were the main focus this chapter, you can tell the conflict is building in the background. There are so many ways of looking at the future, @Shotrow. I appreciate your comments very much. They take me back to a conversation that I had with the SF...

[mention]Mineira1986[/mention] - Thanks! It means a lot to me how much support you've given me publicly and privately. I'm so glad you're still invested in this plot. [mention]Caesar73[/mention] - Hehe, I don't know what it is, but somehow "<adjective> <name> <object>" names just sound wes...

That stone and pond analogy actually seemed pretty insightful. Very interesting. Not related to these recent chapters, but I've been kind of thinking a bit about the differences between the ways you and I portray the future in our story. There's a lot of ways to describe it. Civilization being outwa...

Pretty nice. There's something to be said for short, straightforward stories like this.

Different scenarios and targets... what if they manage to dox and track down a notorious internet troll? Or what about a case of mistaken identity?

Wonder what Lucille's up to now. Those girls are certainly not making it difficult for her.

Definitely a bit on the hardcore side, but very well-written and well-described.

Well, that description of Beth goes a long way to addressing my earlier complaint.

They're definitely not taking this ghost thing very seriously. Kind of funny they left her tied up though. XD

Ovi1 wrote: ↑1 year ago Thanks for the tag. It was another nice chapter. Though with how long it took for me to remember where the story was, I hope you'll agree that there are more enough storylines to keep a nice balance.

Sorry, I'm not sure what you mean. Enough storylines where? Balance between what?

[mention]Caesar73[/mention] ,[mention]trainer[/mention], and [mention]RopeBunny[/mention] - Thank you. I'm really glad that you're all still reading and enjoying this tale. It's nice to know that my silly ideas are appreciated. :3 Today's update comes with another wonderful illustration by Parassaux...

It was not so much that Giselle was lazy, she was just lucky. Her strategy was not to make any choices and don't base her strategy on her opponent and just hope the coin flips in the correct way. Oh, I thought that it was because she wasn't making any choices that her opponent couldn't discern any ...

And now we finally meet the ghost of the manor. One down, four to go.

One problem I'm having is telling the five girls apart. Might have been nice to spend a little more time establishing their individual personalities and motivations.

But either way, I'm excited to see where this goes.

Nice introduction to probability theory, @Beaumains. I have lost the bubble (a submarine sailor's term) on why Willet gets to wrap Giselle, But it didn't matter. I still enjoyed this chapter very much. Glad it's not just me. I was confused about that as well. Interesting contest of wits here. It's ...

A found footage story? I don't believe I've ever seen that here before. Interested to see where this goes.

Nice part. Good to be back with Sweet Becky. I am curious what you are planning with the forced labor. Mini games? Or true labor? The latter, I suppose. I figure it's like one of those mobile games where you expend energy to clear obstructions, except it takes actual time and effort. Probably more ...

Thanks for the comments. I got an amazing commission from Parasaux. https://images-wixmp-ed30a86b8c4ca887773594c2.wixmp.com/f/31220d03-542c-4463-b081-d10128e3cf5d/dfcqzkz-ce37322a-a97a-4b6a-ae18-abdd47df47b7.jpg/v1/fill/w_1280,h_1475,q_75,strp/commission__stuck_in_the_barn_by_parassaux_dfcqzkz-fullv...

Well, she took her captivity better than expected. It sounds like she's finally adapting to the camp.

I don't know if I'd want to be named after the dead spouse of someone I know, but I'm glad Maddie 2's happy about it. XD.

Good to see some more cooperation between the Colonists and Bandits, but it looks like things are coming to a head in terms of their relationship.

Looks like a promising start. Loved the programming talk at the beginning. :3

Just a quick note about your gender codes. Around here, lower-case letters in gender codes mean the character is a minor. Since both characters are adults in this story, it should be M/F.

Oh wow. Just came across this. I'm not normally a fan of creepy stories, but this just hits all the right notes for me. Very emotional and relatable. Good job!

Continues to be a very steamy story with a lot of underlying sweetness. Is this the end, or are you planning even more?

Here's something that may help in making your stories more immersive: Keep in mind how humans experience the world. That is, through the senses. Don't write what happened. Write what your POV character saw , heard , and felt . It can really help your reader feel like they're there. If your character...

While we wait for the next chapter, with the permission (and some encourage) from the author [mention]Shotrow[/mention], I present the concepts for three characters from this great story! Tons of work, but also tons of fun while drawing them =) https://wixmp-ed30a86b8c4ca887773594c2.wixmp.com/f/c2b...

For someone who initially "took a lot a lot of convincing" to play these games, Mark does play the disciplinarian well. Another good chapter!

Indeed, it was far from a critique. I hope I have not discouraged you in any way to continue with this universe. Oh no, not at all. Things have been pretty busy for me lately, so I'm not sure when I'll get out the next chapter, but it's coming and I haven't lost interest. You raise some good points...