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by Shotrow
1 year ago
Forum: Fictional Stories For Everyone
Topic: Riders of the Midnight Sun (f+/f+) Chapter 20 Posted 2024-04-08
Replies: 211
Views: 76932

Re: Riders of the Midnight Sun (f+/f+) Chapter 17 Posted 2022-12-11

Chapter 18 After some time, the crowds in the courtyard started to disperse. Sweet Becky was left alone with her thoughts as she tried to process everything she had witnessed. She had more to work with now than she did just a short time ago, and it was just a question of making it all fit together....
by Shotrow
1 year ago
Forum: Fictional Stories For Everyone
Topic: The Rookie (F/F & M/F) - Epilogue (Mar. 2, 2023) [Story Finished]
Replies: 36
Views: 16825

Re: The Rookie (F/F & M/F) - Chapter 2 (Jan. 13, 2023)

Glad to see this story continue. "Police, open up!" Michelle knocks on the door loudly. "Can I help you?" the older lady, about 65, woman answers in an aggressive tone. "A neighbor said you were screaming loudly in pain." "I sure as hell did, but I sure wasn't gett...
by Shotrow
1 year ago
Forum: Fictional Stories For Everyone
Topic: The Rookie (F/F & M/F) - Epilogue (Mar. 2, 2023) [Story Finished]
Replies: 36
Views: 16825

Re: The Rookie (F/F & M/F)

Glad to see you've started on a series. Sorry it took me awhile to see this. It sounds like this could be a pretty interesting premise for the story. It seems like in this chapter, your main goal is to establish your protagonist's characterization. I think it's good to keep "show, don't tell&qu...
by Shotrow
1 year ago
Forum: Fictional Stories For Everyone
Topic: The Struggle of the Streaming Sisters (f/f) (one shot + illustration)
Replies: 12
Views: 9428

Re: The Struggle of the Streaming Sisters (f/f) (one shot)

I think that BlissfulMisery revers to phrases like "the saccharine dialogue, and the sanctimonious lessons" which has some words which very few individuals would write naturally. These things seem very AI-ish for a lighthearted story as if they were grabbed from an academic paper. I trust...
by Shotrow
1 year ago
Forum: Fictional Stories For Everyone
Topic: Twins in Danger (MF/ff)
Replies: 5
Views: 5817

Re: Twins in Danger (MF/ff)

This was well-written. I wish you success on your new story style.
by Shotrow
1 year ago
Forum: Fictional Stories For Everyone
Topic: The Struggle of the Streaming Sisters (f/f) (one shot + illustration)
Replies: 12
Views: 9428

Re: The Struggle of the Streaming Sisters (f/f) (one shot)

[mention]BlissfulMisery[/mention] You know, I think what you're actually seeing is the AI's influence on my writing style. 😂 As far as I can remember, no part of this is directly copied AI except for the names. I'm pretty sure I rewrote it from memory, not even referencing the original AI convo. How...
by Shotrow
1 year ago
Forum: Fictional Stories For Everyone
Topic: Naughty f/f
Replies: 11
Views: 7981

Re: Naughty f/f

This was an adorably creative story!
by Shotrow
1 year ago
Forum: Fictional Stories For Everyone
Topic: The Struggle of the Streaming Sisters (f/f) (one shot + illustration)
Replies: 12
Views: 9428

Re: The Struggle of the Streaming Sisters (f/f) (one shot)

[mention]Beaumains[/mention] - Glad you enjoyed it! I don't mean to give the wrong impression. This is not an AI written story per se. As I said, I rewrote the whole thing with my own wording, changing some details to give it more mainstream appeal. Even when I'm playing with the AI, it tends to be ...
by Shotrow
1 year ago
Forum: Fictional Stories For Everyone
Topic: The Struggle of the Streaming Sisters (f/f) (one shot + illustration)
Replies: 12
Views: 9428

Re: The Struggle of the Streaming Sisters (f/f) (one shot)

[mention]JulieG[/mention], [mention]Caesar73[/mention] Thanks! Glad you enjoyed it. I know the idea of "scary/tough acting person is afraid of cute things" has been done before, but it seemed too appropriate and funny not to use it here. [mention]AlexUSA3[/mention] Well, this is only meant...
by Shotrow
1 year ago
Forum: Story Catalog
Topic: The Struggle of the Streaming Sisters (f/f) - One shot
Replies: 0
Views: 2581

The Struggle of the Streaming Sisters (f/f) - One shot

Title of Story - The Struggle of the Streaming Sisters Author - shotrow Gender Roles - f/f Content Rating - PG Status - One shot Link to Topic- https://tugstories.com/viewtopic.php?f=8&t=19160 Keywords - siblings, belts, ribbons Synopsis - Two sisters with very different personalities and tastes...
by Shotrow
1 year ago
Forum: Fictional Stories For Everyone
Topic: The Struggle of the Streaming Sisters (f/f) (one shot + illustration)
Replies: 12
Views: 9428

The Struggle of the Streaming Sisters (f/f) (one shot + illustration)

(This story is based loosely on a story I had ChatGPT write for me. I've been playing around with ChatGPT a lot, to the point where I have an entire recurring cast of characters and a rapidly expanding universe that I use for AI stories. It's become a serious addiction for me, making silly fantasies...
by Shotrow
1 year ago
Forum: Fictional Stories For Everyone
Topic: Riders of the Midnight Sun (f+/f+) Chapter 20 Posted 2024-04-08
Replies: 211
Views: 76932

Re: Riders of the Midnight Sun (f+/f+) Chapter 16 Posted 2022-11-14

Chapter 17 Everything was dark. Everything was quiet. Singing Laura floated gently through an endless black void. She had been knocked unconscious in the game once before, but that was only for a moment. Time seemed to stand still, and she began to wonder if there was going to be any end to this st...
by Shotrow
1 year ago
Forum: TUG Talk
Topic: Anchor points in a home.
Replies: 6
Views: 2531

Re: Anchor points in a home.

Here's a link to a blender sketch he made: https://i.imgur.com/k5GYbD7.png He pointed out that you could pile some weight onto the lower end to make it sturdier. While I was digging it up, I was reminded of a similar idea I had for pole-tying based on a misunderstanding of his idea before we exchang...
by Shotrow
1 year ago
Forum: TUG Talk
Topic: Anchor points in a home.
Replies: 6
Views: 2531

Re: Anchor points in a home.

If you like in a wood-framed house (I hear they're not as common in Europe), you could screw in some eye hooks into the studs or joists. If anyone asks, you can say they're to hang a hammock. I actually do hang a hammock in this way. The ones lower to the ground can be for anchoring furniture to kee...
by Shotrow
1 year ago
Forum: TUG Talk
Topic: Video Games with Tying up Players
Replies: 14
Views: 6630

Re: Video Games with Tying up Players

[mention]Starcomet[/mention] If you hadn't heard, TBC has male avatars now. Right now the implementation is kind of haphazard. All the NPCs still call you "Miss" and "girl", customization is extremely limited (there's like three clothing items to choose from at character creation...
by Shotrow
1 year ago
Forum: TUG Talk
Topic: Christian Youth Group tie up games
Replies: 6
Views: 2772

Re: Christian Youth Group tie up games

This makes me kind of uncomfortable. Yes, it's a very appealing fantasy, but adults pushing it on to kids who didn't ask for it is a little sketchy.
by Shotrow
1 year ago
Forum: Fictional Stories For Everyone
Topic: Riders of the Midnight Sun (f+/f+) Chapter 20 Posted 2024-04-08
Replies: 211
Views: 76932

Re: Riders of the Midnight Sun (f+/f+) Chapter 16 Posted 2022-11-14

Well, if we're talking about science fiction instead of fantasy, then you run into the problem of understanding the brain, but of understanding consciousness. I was picturing something that would work at a fairly shallow level. You feel the emotions they're feeling, share the emotional reaction they...
by Shotrow
1 year ago
Forum: Fictional Stories For Everyone
Topic: Riders of the Midnight Sun (f+/f+) Chapter 20 Posted 2024-04-08
Replies: 211
Views: 76932

Re: Riders of the Midnight Sun (f+/f+) Chapter 16 Posted 2022-11-14

The training part was partly inspired by some of the stories I've heard from someone I know who works as a real life animal trainer, and partly from the superstitions I've seen develop when something in a game is controlled by RNG. Well, people have a hard time intuitively grasping statistics and r...
by Shotrow
1 year ago
Forum: Fictional Stories For Everyone
Topic: (The Office US Fanfic): The Contract (F/F) - Chapter 11 + Epilogue - Request by Ducttapelover93
Replies: 43
Views: 16767

Re: (The Office US Fanfic): The Contract (F/F) - Chapter 3 - Request by Ducttapelover93

I haven't seen very much of this show, but I didn't want to fall too far behind with this. From what little I've seen you're doing an amazing job of capturing the tone, pacing, and characters of the show. Kelly, as you portray her, is kind of terrifying in how quickly her mood shifted in the first c...
by Shotrow
1 year ago
Forum: Fictional Stories For Everyone
Topic: Riders of the Midnight Sun (f+/f+) Chapter 20 Posted 2024-04-08
Replies: 211
Views: 76932

Re: Riders of the Midnight Sun (f+/f+) Chapter 16 Posted 2022-11-14

Thanks for the comments, everyone! Always nice to see. [mention]Mineira1986[/mention] Was only "planned" after I put up one of the chapters focusing on the Summer Campers and realized that I missed the opportunity to show that the wolves in their possession. But it worked out for the best,...
by Shotrow
1 year ago
Forum: Fictional Stories For Everyone
Topic: RATBAG LOVES FISHPASTE (ff & tomcat/m)
Replies: 6
Views: 3334

Re: RATBAG LOVES FISHPASTE

You forgot the gender tags. 😛 It's a cute story idea. I like it. Can't say much more about it, since it's very short. I also had to look up what "the close" meant. 😅 I'm still not sure if I understand even after seeing the dictionary definition. Do you have a picture? Google is failing me ...
by Shotrow
1 year ago
Forum: Fictional Stories For Everyone
Topic: Riders of the Midnight Sun (f+/f+) Chapter 20 Posted 2024-04-08
Replies: 211
Views: 76932

Re: Riders of the Midnight Sun (f+/f+) Chapter 15 Posted 2022-10-15

Thanks! It's good to be able to post again. This might be the first chapter that doesn't feature any tie-ups. There was one more thing I wanted to include, but I figured the chapter was already long enough, and I still have room in the story's timeline.
by Shotrow
1 year ago
Forum: Fictional Stories For Everyone
Topic: Riders of the Midnight Sun (f+/f+) Chapter 20 Posted 2024-04-08
Replies: 211
Views: 76932

Re: Riders of the Midnight Sun (f+/f+) Chapter 15 Posted 2022-10-15

Chapter 16 Sweet Becky stared out the barred window of her cell as she sat on the stone floor. Two conversations were going on between the girls of the cell block. A leisurely chat in words and a more clandestine but still casual conversation in gestures made with hands stuck out between the prison...
by Shotrow
1 year ago
Forum: TUG Talk
Topic: Rope supplier
Replies: 13
Views: 4090

Re: Rope supplier

honourthechapter1775 wrote: 1 year ago Has anyone ordered from twisted monk before? Im considering purchasing some pretty soon but I don't know if they're any good.


https://www.twistedmonk.com/
Yes, I have. I can vouch that it's good quality stuff.
by Shotrow
1 year ago
Forum: Fictional Stories For Everyone
Topic: Riders of the Midnight Sun (f+/f+) Chapter 20 Posted 2024-04-08
Replies: 211
Views: 76932

Re: Riders of the Midnight Sun (f+/f+) Chapter 15 Posted 2022-10-15

Yeah, I suppose it often comes down to a question of what details the author focuses on. I chose to focus on the sense of terror and defeat in that last chapter, so I can't really complain if that's what made the biggest impression on people. I should just take the fact that people care about what h...