Stories of Tie Up Games

I liked this chapter. At first, I thought the story kinda came to a halt with the arguing continuing with no end in sight. But luckily Steph saved the chapter at the end, setting up for a nice fight with Floria. I thought you were about to end this story with some sort of weak peace agreement, but ...

Resourceful, very resourceful. Not sure if this would actually work in the real world (I really don't know) but it seems plausible. Hopefully it will be enough for Swift Fox to get away this time. Somehow, this reminds me a little bit like Monsters University, from Pixar. A team of people who looked...

So Evie (and Sophie) getting in trouble was expected, but I didn't expect them to try and sneak out so quickly. I thought it was going to happen during the concert with the Queen. Sounds like Christine should spend less time with Sarah and more time actually checking the perimeter of her safe house....

Chapter 38: PRESENT DAY “Up, Steph, come on.” Floria walked to Stephanie and took her arms. She half helped, half pulled Stephanie’s upper body up to a kneeling position. The blonde sat on her own heels, she faced away from the other bound girls. She waited for Floria to remove her gag, but the tal...

That is a pretty intense chapter. The temperature is rising. Camilla wants to get her revenge. Karissa is? Just Karissa mostly - and Floria is trying hard to be the grown up - very hard. She ties even up Camilla. But in the end it is Janice who breaks through the circle of attack and response. That...

Nice! Looks like a break after the first day in the Happy Trails worlds. Love how you only mention Sweet Becky's name, but conceal the others. I love when a writer treats their readers as smart instead of giving them all the information. Beautifully done. As a person with anxiety disorder, I can tot...

Interesting. Can't help but find similarities with Bree: both are introduced into a world of tie-ups, both dislike them at first, everybody around them seem to enjoy them. I don't know how this story will resolve, though. Bree always had the option to walk away; it would be a return to her already d...

Well, that was a bit of a change to the structure of the chapters. We usually had a non-bondage scene at first and then the bondage scene after, or a whole chapter dedicated to a bondage one. This time, we had half chapter about Sarah-Christine and then the plot. I liked that change. I also liked th...

Interesting story. I could have used a bit more description of how the girls managed to secure the boys after they had freed themselves, but I'm not complaining. Wonder what the "prize" is going to be.

While it's good to see Anna recovering slowly, giving a bigger impact for her defeat, I'm not a fan that any potential tension with other characters are solved in one conversation. In more realistic terms, there are a total of ten different women and one of them has been almost killed. Tensions shou...

Part 37: PRESENT DAY “First of all, no talking. You two are gagged so that means, no freaking talking.” Floria said. “Yeah, no talking.” Camilla repeated, delivering another spank on Stephanie. “Second… We are going to end this matter tonight.” Floria said. “Or at very least, how it’s being done. W...

Sorry for the delay! New chapter right here. But first... So Floria is taking charge in clearing this mess up - she acts as the adult. How she reigned in the enraged Camilla was very cute to read. I can´t get that picture out of my head, Camilla brandishing the spatula. I might be wrong here: but is...

I'll go for C.

Great chapter. Straight to Fort Mallow without further interruptions. I like how you showed Lady Maybelle's great influence with the toll at the bridge. A small detail, but very well included. I love Lady Maybelle's introduction. When she was mentioned in chapter 2, I thought of a character who just...

That was a nice conversation between Anna and Kate. I was expecting Anna to get more emotional, but I'll assume it was the medication because she looked very calm for a woman who has just taken the beating of her life by a person she deeply hates. Still, way better than the sheep jokes Last chapter ...

The sex and life-death choices should be firmly seperated. I agree. It was an odd decision to make that transition from "she could have died because of me" to "I deserve to be punished. Please punish me, mistress". One more viable option would have been something like "Evie...

The last chance to end the circle of revenge here is also disregarded. It's gonna be a long night (although already a lot has happened!). I thought that too, but I am not entirely sure - I still hope that one of the characters will be able to stop the spiral of escalation. If anybody is able to do ...

Nice! I wasn't expecting the twist to be delivered that way. The betrayal was in the cards, but also the possibility that both girls keep a code of honor and parted separate ways... and Shy Sarah making an eventual return later to collect the bounty. This twist did both things. Shy Sarah did get Swe...

There wasn't a single time where von Winterfeldt and his incompetent valkyries won in a one on one fight. Not with his fortress, his robots, nothing. That was a gigantic disappointment from the first story. Now in this story... this is how you raise tension. Ank-Sun-Amun is fantastic! It's so good, ...

Wonderful chapter: Janice standing up to Stephanie and actually hitting back - with books :) Then -Stephanies totally surprised by Floria and Camilla. An then the end: Camilla searching for Karissa without any doubt to use the spatula on Karissa and then the end of the chapter, the soft moan coming...

Mmm... I feel there are two things in this chapters included to tell the reader some facts, when I believe it should have been better to show them (instead of tell): the first one, is the explanation of why they didn't bring in the Ank-Sun-Amun's minions. Sure thing, placing two people in the trunk ...

Well, I guess if Swift Fox doesn't choose a side herself, most likely the events will push her into the right direction heh. Creative there, using the mannequins to restraint them. It's so good to read Swift Fox's reactions. I remember The Tangled Maiden, where we met another character with little t...

My take would be... I'd want to see Sweet Becky captured. Since it was established that she had a bounty on chapter 2, it wouldn't be that forced if she ended up at Lady Maybelle's prison. Maybe Shy Sarah doesn't finish the job and Lady Maybelle sends someone else. Or at some point, Shy Sarah does c...

Part 35: PRESENT DAY “H-hi…” Janice took a step backwards. Stephanie’s blue eyes focused on the brunette. Even with only the lights from the street, Janice’s glasses glowed in the living room. Stephanie didn’t smile. She didn’t pursue her lips. Her right hand rested on the closed door. Janice stepp...

Seems pretty much like all is going Stephanies way: Karissa humilated, spanked, balltied, forced to smell her own shoe. blindfolded in her own closet. Stephanie is definetely of the rocker. What she is doing is unsafe and dangerous - but so far she succeeds. Also she has Janice trapped. She is pret...