Stories of Tie Up Games

This is a very interesting concept, I'll be reading the stories whenever I can because those that I have read have been pretty good.

You should absolutely make a part 3! I'm assuming this is your first story at least on the site and its incredibly good, I really like your descriptions and the inner monologue of our poor protagonist Lucy, I wonder what her captors have in store for her.

Wow, there's a lot to unpack here. First, its good to know the identity of the villain, I think its more interesting having her be Agatha's sister than just Veniala's mother. And Veniala, what a character, I don't know what to expect from her, at first I thought that she was going to betray Nissa, b...

I know cliffhangers can feel frustrating but I trust you to deliver on them, whatever happens I'm sure it'll be a fun surprise

Good to see the boys back at their shenanigans, I wonder if they have anything else planned for their prisoners

I usually don't read F/M but since you wrote this story I decided to give it a go and let me tell you that it didn't disappoint at all! It has all that I love of your style and even Sam showed up.

This was a great read, I really liked the characters and you wrote a very dynamic and fun to read dialogue between the two, for me that was the best part of the story but don't let that detract from the other aspects, those were good too!

I really liked the story, its short and to the point but it has a fun enough setting and characters and that's basically all I can ask from a story like this. Much like your previous one I think that it has its "unique touch", but that could be said about every story. What I want to say is...

That was a very fun read, I can only wonder what will Adam do once he returns and finds her girlfriend like that

So the continuation has arrived, great! As someone who read your previous story I must say that I'm kinda excited about this, and this is off to a great start!

Like Beumanis said the change of pace and stakes in the story, although clear, isn't something bad at all. Coming to think about it, this isn't really a change as much as it is a return to the origins of the story, bondage games among the family that end up pulling other people in.

Stryker sure has no time to get bored with Elise and Sarah around, they make for a really fun trio. Also and like many have already told you, don't feel bad about the delay on the chapters, we all get that you, like everyone on the site, have a life outside writing these stories and that's fine.

It was fun to see Carla and Hazel having "fun" despite being both tied up, now they can only hope that the house was cleaned while they were at it and more importantly, that the girls keep their promise which considered how unlucky Carla is may not even happen.

like ninterz said the hostage change is a nice idea, we'll get to see how the usual dom girls do when tied up while also seeing Wendy having a special individual revenge for each of them. Great!

That's a hell of a way to be discovered for Tim, tied up and gagged in the middle of the woods AND by two girls who don't even speak his language

I know the story is one year old but I did not mind seeing it on the top page because of how good it was. I of course wouldn't mind a sequel but I get that the story wasn't meant to be continued and it has a nice ending so I'm okay with it being left as it is.

Interesting story so far

Great and surprisingly wholesome story. You're a good writer so I was surprised to see that you don't have many stories on the site so if you write something again feel free to tag me and I'll happily read it.

Wow I really did overlook this, this was a fun ride through the chapters with great tickling sequences and pretty fun characters, especially the nerd trio.

You did a great job with the @abcdefsmith3 request and Its good to see him happy with the results, I'd be really glad too if a request I made got turned into a story so good!

That was a fun story, Emily and her mum sure are a devious duo.

Is the story over? I don't quite get why you're asking for criticism all of a sudden.

Like everyone has said I think that things could have gone a lot worse for Carla, but who knows what Carla's friend Karen is in for.

Apparently Chaina can get kinda devious but lets see if she can push Wendy into it.

Pretty unexpected turn of events on the last chapter, lets see how that turns out in the end!