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by Headmistress
3 years ago
Forum: Fictional Stories For Everyone
Topic: Medic Practice gone wrong (F/F)
Replies: 24
Views: 23360

Re: Medic Practice gone wrong (F/F)

This was a really good story.

I had a first-aid class that was a bit like this once, so it reminded me a bit of that.

Anyway, it was a fun read. Thanks for sharing.
by Headmistress
3 years ago
Forum: Fictional Stories For Everyone
Topic: Murder, She Wrote - The Schoolgirl and Jessica Fletcher's Revenge F/f (Completed).
Replies: 59
Views: 41716

Re: Murder, She Wrote - The Schoolgirl and Jessica Fletcher's Revenge F/f (Chapter 6 added).

“May?” “May?” May was happily asleep. Her body felt deliciously warm and her bed felt extremely comfortable. The only problem was that someone kept shaking her shoulder and trying to wake her up. It must be her mother waking her up. That meant that everything that had happened with Jessica…that must...
by Headmistress
3 years ago
Forum: Fictional Stories For Everyone
Topic: CITIZEN'S ARREST: A DAD'S DUTY (M/m)
Replies: 31
Views: 109230

Re: CITIZEN'S ARREST: A DAD'S DUTY (M/m) *A FATHER/SON TALE*

Very good story. Dad sounds very no-nonsense :).

Maybe someday, you could do another sequel about the narrator and his dad catching the second burglar?
by Headmistress
3 years ago
Forum: Fictional Stories For Everyone
Topic: Aunt Robin's plan. F/m
Replies: 15
Views: 18960

Re: Aunt Robin's plan. F/m

Poor Nate.

Hopefully, he gets out of this situation in good time :).

This is a good story with well-written characters.
by Headmistress
3 years ago
Forum: Fictional Stories For Everyone
Topic: The Dorky Detective: The prologue (F/F )
Replies: 7
Views: 8973

Re: The Dorky Detective: The prologue (F/F )

Good story with an intriguing beginning.

I wonder if those two can solve the crime, but I'll have to wait and see.
by Headmistress
3 years ago
Forum: Fictional Stories For Everyone
Topic: Murder, She Wrote - The Schoolgirl and Jessica Fletcher's Revenge F/f (Completed).
Replies: 59
Views: 41716

Re: Murder, She Wrote - The Schoolgirl and Jessica Fletcher's Revenge F/f (Chapter 5 added).

May struggled for a couple of minutes, but she soon stopped. The ropes were too tight to get out of and her wrists were crossed behind her, so she couldn’t reach any of the other ropes. Furthermore, the water had thoroughly soaked the ropes, so all the knots had become stiff and unyielding. May deci...
by Headmistress
3 years ago
Forum: Fictional Stories For Everyone
Topic: Murder, She Wrote - The Schoolgirl and Jessica Fletcher's Revenge F/f (Completed).
Replies: 59
Views: 41716

Re: Murder, She Wrote - The Schoolgirl and Jessica Fletcher's Revenge F/f (Chapter 5 added).

Lol, well I've never been tied up in either.

When I wrote this, I went with what I thought would have been the more comfortable option.

I'm sure that Jessica would think so too.
by Headmistress
3 years ago
Forum: Fictional Stories For Everyone
Topic: Murder, She Wrote - The Schoolgirl and Jessica Fletcher's Revenge F/f (Completed).
Replies: 59
Views: 41716

Re: Murder, She Wrote - The Schoolgirl and Jessica Fletcher's Revenge F/f (Chapter 4 added).

Jessica leaned over and restacked May’s stack into a fan of five cards and then did the same with her own. “The rules are simple. You choose a card from your fan and I will turn it over and then I will do the same. While in some games, certain suits rank higher than each other, I will keep it simple...
by Headmistress
3 years ago
Forum: Fictional Stories For Everyone
Topic: Murder, She Wrote - The Schoolgirl and Jessica Fletcher's Revenge F/f (Completed).
Replies: 59
Views: 41716

Re: Murder, She Wrote - The Schoolgirl and Jessica Fletcher's Revenge F/f (Chapter 4 added).

Hi. Thanks for the kind feedback and comments. I looked up Boot Camp - I think that story was actually written by a user from here called Jennybond. She and I were here at the same time when I first joined. She and I had very similar writing styles and our stories often followed similar plot lines -...
by Headmistress
3 years ago
Forum: Fictional Stories For Everyone
Topic: Never leave your phone unguarded (M/m + short self/M, m/M, mm/m, self/m) [Completed]
Replies: 142
Views: 121214

Re: Never leave your phone unguarded (M/m)

Hi, Firstly, I would like to say not to worry about being nervous. I was very nervous too when I first came here and my very first story was pretty terrible because I wrote it in haste, but what you have written here is very good and I really enjoyed it. The more you write, the easier it will get. M...
by Headmistress
3 years ago
Forum: Fictional Stories For Everyone
Topic: Little mistake at camp (m/m) part III
Replies: 11
Views: 22276

Re: Little mistake at camp (m/m) part II

Hi,

This is good, so far, but the top says Part 2 and I only have one chapter.

Is there a Part 1 somewhere else on the board?

Overall, this is a good beginning and I look forward to the next part.
by Headmistress
3 years ago
Forum: Fictional Stories For Everyone
Topic: Dora, the house clearer F/ff
Replies: 8
Views: 12666

Re: Dora, the house clearer F/ff

Dora certainly has been busy :).

At least, all of her "victims" were accommodating.

Good story, so far.
by Headmistress
3 years ago
Forum: Fictional Stories For Everyone
Topic: The Nerds, the Jocks, and the Student-Teacher (mm/F, mf/F) Story Complete -- 3/16
Replies: 38
Views: 25373

Re: The Nerds, the Jocks, and the Student-Teacher (mm/F) - New Part 4 - Complete

Great story - good to hear that Miss Lawrence eventually got rescued :).

I like the fact that it is open for a sequel too.
by Headmistress
3 years ago
Forum: Fictional Stories For Everyone
Topic: The Nerds, the Jocks, and the Student-Teacher (mm/F, mf/F) Story Complete -- 3/16
Replies: 38
Views: 25373

Re: The Nerds, the Jocks, and the Student-Teacher (mm/F) - New Part 4 - Complete

Great story - good to hear that Heather eventually got rescued :).

I like the fact that it is open for a sequel too.
by Headmistress
3 years ago
Forum: Fictional Stories For Everyone
Topic: Murder, She Wrote - The Schoolgirl and Jessica Fletcher's Revenge F/f (Completed).
Replies: 59
Views: 41716

Re: Murder, She Wrote - The Schoolgirl and Jessica Fletcher's Revenge F/f (Chapter 3 added).

May had now been sitting on her chair for several hours struggling to no avail. All the ropes were too restrictive and she couldn’t break free. The gag in her mouth tasted horrible and all the tape that Jessica had added was making her sweat, but it wasn’t getting any looser. The blindfold was also ...
by Headmistress
3 years ago
Forum: Fictional Stories For Everyone
Topic: Murder, She Wrote - The Schoolgirl and Jessica Fletcher's Revenge F/f (Completed).
Replies: 59
Views: 41716

Re: Murder, She Wrote - The Schoolgirl and Jessica Fletcher's Revenge F/f (Chapter 3 added).

Lol. I think Sheriff Tupper did have a lie detector because I have vague memories of one being in the TV show when it used to play on TV. But I could be wrong.

I haven't seen any victims tied uo and gaged in the show yet :). Maybe later that will come..... :)
by Headmistress
3 years ago
Forum: Fictional Stories For Everyone
Topic: Murder, She Wrote - The Schoolgirl and Jessica Fletcher's Revenge F/f (Completed).
Replies: 59
Views: 41716

Re: Murder, She Wrote - The Schoolgirl and Jessica Fletcher's Revenge F/f (Chapter 3 added).

Lol, thanks.

I am working on Part 4 now.

I have only seen two wpisodes that were set in Cabot Cove so far, so I am kind of getting inspiration as I go along.

When I get to the lie detector, I might try and write it in somehow.
by Headmistress
3 years ago
Forum: Fictional Stories For Everyone
Topic: Teacher Teaches Knots (m/F, f/F, m/f) - STORY COMPLETE
Replies: 53
Views: 41489

Re: Teacher Teaches Knots (m/F, f/F, m/f) - STORY COMPLETE

Great story.

Jim was very lucky to get so much "tutoring".

Hopefully he got that Scouts badge after all that practise :).
by Headmistress
3 years ago
Forum: Fictional Stories For Everyone
Topic: Tied for the Top m/m
Replies: 13
Views: 19195

Re: Tied for the Top m/m

Very good story.

It looks as if Jake got his just desserts :), but it will be interesting to see if Toby can stay out of trouble.
by Headmistress
3 years ago
Forum: Fictional Stories For Everyone
Topic: Valentines Day Fun - F/(M Self)
Replies: 13
Views: 14299

Re: Valentines Day Fun - F/(M Self)

This is a good start and I enjoyed it.

Paige sounds like a girl who gets things done :).
by Headmistress
3 years ago
Forum: Fictional Stories For Everyone
Topic: The Nerds, the Jocks, and the Student-Teacher (mm/F, mf/F) Story Complete -- 3/16
Replies: 38
Views: 25373

Re: The Nerds, the Jocks, and the Student-Teacher (mm/F) - NEW Part 3 added

Very goos new part to this story.

KI am actually familiar with Kelly Bundy and always thought she was cute, so mabe Miss Lawrence could be sort of
a modern updated version of her just as you said :).

Anyway, it is a very good story. I look forward to the next part.
by Headmistress
3 years ago
Forum: Fictional Stories For Everyone
Topic: Murder, She Wrote - The Schoolgirl and Jessica Fletcher's Revenge F/f (Completed).
Replies: 59
Views: 41716

Re: Murder, She Wrote - The Schoolgirl and Jessica Fletcher's Revenge F/f (Chapter 2 added).

Chapter 3. Just as Alison was about to leave the bathroom, she caught a glimpse of herself in the mirrored door of the high cabinet and her gaze then fell on the cabinet under the basin. Alison had always been a naturally curious girl and she decided to have a quick look in the bottom cabinet. If J...
by Headmistress
3 years ago
Forum: Fictional Stories For Everyone
Topic: Murder, She Wrote - The Schoolgirl and Jessica Fletcher's Revenge F/f (Completed).
Replies: 59
Views: 41716

Re: Murder, She Wrote - The Schoolgirl and Jessica Fletcher's Revenge F/f (Chapter 2 added).

Chapter 2. May quickly discovered that while the ropes weren’t too tight or uncomfortable, they were firm and secure. The second problem was her school blazer. While May had a very good body, the school uniform was not particularly well-cut. May was also one of those girls who was unfortunately “be...
by Headmistress
3 years ago
Forum: Fictional Stories For Everyone
Topic: The Nerds, the Jocks, and the Student-Teacher (mm/F, mf/F) Story Complete -- 3/16
Replies: 38
Views: 25373

Re: The Nerds, the Jocks, and the Student-Teacher (mm/F) - Part 2 added

Great story and very well-written. i really enjoyed it.

I wasn't familiar with Jill, so I looked her up, so I think I understand the kind of look you were going for regarding the teacher.

Hopefully, Miss Lawrence/"the princess" can find her way out of the situation :).
by Headmistress
3 years ago
Forum: Fictional Stories For Everyone
Topic: Murder, She Wrote - The Schoolgirl and Jessica Fletcher's Revenge F/f (Completed).
Replies: 59
Views: 41716

Re: Murder, She Wrote - The Schoolgirl and Jessica Fletcher's Revenge F/F.

Hi, Sorry about the confusion - one of the other posts up above said that they had seen my work before and asked about KP Presents - so I assumed that they were asking me if I had put any of my work on KP Presents' page or if I had worked with KP Presents. What I meant was that while I do remember t...