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by GreyLord
3 years ago
Forum: Fictional Stories For Adults
Topic: The Daughter’s Bodyguard (M/F) *Final Chapter Posted*
Replies: 107
Views: 49229

Re: The Daughter’s Bodyguard (M/F)

Yes, Semper Fi! Outstanding story. Outstanding writing.
by GreyLord
3 years ago
Forum: Fictional Stories For Adults
Topic: Simple English (F/F) COMPLETE
Replies: 39
Views: 23726

Re: Simple English (F/F) Chapter 3 added 15.4.21

Excellent writing! Are either of these two women in the right? Your descriptive powers are such that I feel as if I were there seeing the story unfold.
by GreyLord
3 years ago
Forum: Fictional Stories For Adults
Topic: Be Careful What You Wish For (M/F)
Replies: 4
Views: 7617

Re: Be Careful What You Wish For (M/F)

What a good well written story.
by GreyLord
3 years ago
Forum: Fictional Stories For Adults
Topic: The Daughter’s Bodyguard (M/F) *Final Chapter Posted*
Replies: 107
Views: 49229

Re: The Daughter’s Bodyguard (M/F)

Oh, as ever, we need more. One minor nitpick. You wrote, "which he’d packed after being caught". Shouldn't that have been "which he’d packed before being caught"?
by GreyLord
3 years ago
Forum: TUG Art
Topic: Family Fun with Dark Hiro (Unknown/fF)
Replies: 21
Views: 25705

Re: Family Fun with Dark Hiro (Unknown/fF)

Thank you for posting Dark Hiro's art. I just keep finding wonderful new things (new to me) on this site. Is Dark Hiro still active?
by GreyLord
3 years ago
Forum: Fictional Stories For Adults
Topic: The Daughter’s Bodyguard (M/F) *Final Chapter Posted*
Replies: 107
Views: 49229

Re: The Daughter’s Bodyguard (M/F)

A Marine might say, "The excrement has hit the air conditioning!" I had a feeling that dear old dad was going to be a problem. But Marines and women like Katie are first and foremost problem solvers. I looking forward with great anticipation to reading how this progresses.
by GreyLord
3 years ago
Forum: Fictional Stories For Adults
Topic: King Of The House F/M M/F+ *complete*
Replies: 34
Views: 22888

Re: King Of The House F/M M/F+

Hi [mention]Bigballgag1[/mention], you have an interesting and complex beginning. You have caught my attention and I am eager to find out how you will progress once he deals with Amber. Please keep up the good work.
by GreyLord
3 years ago
Forum: TUG Art
Topic: STORY COVERS AND PROMO BANNERS
Replies: 18
Views: 21480

Re: STORY COVERS AND PROMO BANNERS

What an interesting and useful service you are providing @bondagefreak. I hope that the day will come in which I have a story worthy of calling on your skills and talents.
by GreyLord
3 years ago
Forum: Fictional Stories For Adults
Topic: The Daughter’s Bodyguard (M/F) *Final Chapter Posted*
Replies: 107
Views: 49229

Re: The Daughter’s Bodyguard (M/F)

Danny is one fortunate jarhead. And Katie is lucky too. But I am a little worried about the dad. I can see that he might throw a monkey wrench into the works. Please keep writing, inquiring minds want to know.
by GreyLord
3 years ago
Forum: Fictional Stories For Adults
Topic: Simple English (F/F) COMPLETE
Replies: 39
Views: 23726

Re: Simple English (F/F) Chapter 2 added 12.4.21

Your first two chapters do start with a bang. The slave is receiving harsh punishment. Will we learn who the slave is and what she has done that caused Evelyn's reaction? Will there be a role reversal later in the story? Is it possible that this story could have a happy ending? So many questions? I ...
by GreyLord
3 years ago
Forum: Fictional Stories For Adults
Topic: The Daughter’s Bodyguard (M/F) *Final Chapter Posted*
Replies: 107
Views: 49229

Re: The Daughter’s Bodyguard (M/F)

I must say that this is poignant. Danny has been hiding these things for years. Now it is all out in the open. Thank all goodness that he has Kate.
by GreyLord
3 years ago
Forum: Fictional Stories For Adults
Topic: We're all mad here (?FM+/?F+) [FINISHED]
Replies: 57
Views: 29225

Re: We're all mad here (?FM+/?F+) [NEW 012 posted April 10th]

Will she get justice? You are doing so well with this. As always, I'm looking forward to the next installment.
by GreyLord
3 years ago
Forum: Fictional Stories For Adults
Topic: The Daughter’s Bodyguard (M/F) *Final Chapter Posted*
Replies: 107
Views: 49229

Re: The Daughter’s Bodyguard (M/F)

You certainly continue to please. Keep up the good work.
by GreyLord
3 years ago
Forum: Fictional Stories For Everyone
Topic: All in the family (f/m, mm/FF, F/mff, F/f, f/mfF, FF/f, mf/FF and more)
Replies: 963
Views: 1169022

Re: All in the family (f/m, mm/FF, F/mff, F/f, f/mfF, FF/f, mf/FF and more)

I predict that this will be a very long 24 hours. These are very tough ladies.
by GreyLord
3 years ago
Forum: Fictional Stories For Adults
Topic: The Daughter’s Bodyguard (M/F) *Final Chapter Posted*
Replies: 107
Views: 49229

Re: The Daughter’s Bodyguard (M/F)

TayDay95, you have rocked this chapter. I'm sure there will be obstacles but Katie and Danny are meant to be.
by GreyLord
3 years ago
Forum: Fictional Stories For Adults
Topic: .
Replies: 12
Views: 14702

Re: Paying the Bills (M/F)

Hello SpaceHeatGuy, you have made an interesting start. I certainly hope you will continue with this. Your characters are believable and I am looking forward to reading more about them.
by GreyLord
3 years ago
Forum: Fictional Stories For Adults
Topic: House Party (F/F, M/FF)
Replies: 14
Views: 16699

Re: House Party (F/F, M/FF)

I know writing is hard. But you have such a good story going. I surely do hope that you can see you way to continuing it.
by GreyLord
3 years ago
Forum: Fictional Stories For Adults
Topic: The Daughter’s Bodyguard (M/F) *Final Chapter Posted*
Replies: 107
Views: 49229

Re: The Daughter’s Bodyguard (M/F)

So not a place to leave us, TayDay95. You have built the tensions to a breaking point. Will they continue by having vanilla sex? Or will Katie decide that she should be tied up to do this? Or will Danny make a decision to control what happens? Or will some emergency stop the encounter? You have so m...
by GreyLord
3 years ago
Forum: Fictional Stories For Adults
Topic: The Daughter’s Bodyguard (M/F) *Final Chapter Posted*
Replies: 107
Views: 49229

Re: The Daughter’s Bodyguard (M/F)

Your story continues to develop nicely. Coming from two very different worlds, Katie and Danny have much to learn about each other. Will TUGS unite?
by GreyLord
3 years ago
Forum: Fictional Stories For Adults
Topic: We're all mad here (?FM+/?F+) [FINISHED]
Replies: 57
Views: 29225

Re: We're all mad here (?FM+/?F+) [NEW 011 posted April 6th]

This is much more fun than Lewis Carroll. Please do continue.
by GreyLord
3 years ago
Forum: True Stories for Adults
Topic: Bondage Introduction (When everything begins); M/F Consensual
Replies: 29
Views: 27342

Re: Bondage Introduction (When everything begins); M/F Consensual

You gave him control and you were both mutually tender. Such good writing.
by GreyLord
3 years ago
Forum: Fictional Stories For Adults
Topic: Devastation - A sequel to Devotion (M/F) (M/M) Complete
Replies: 147
Views: 91256

Re: Devastation - A sequel to Devotion (M/F) (M/M) Complete

Wolfman, I have just finished reading Devastation 8 months after its completion. It has been a long time since a story has captured my interest as this has. I have enjoyed every minute spent reading both the story and the comments of other readers. It has been interesting to see that you remind read...
by GreyLord
3 years ago
Forum: Fictional Stories For Adults
Topic: The Beach (FF/F, MF/F) Completed - Final chapter 3rd April
Replies: 62
Views: 39278

Re: The Beach (FF/F, MF/F) Completed - Final chapter 3rd April

Your ending is of course your privilege. Us readers, equally, can dream also. Good and well written tale. Hope to see you writing again soon.
by GreyLord
3 years ago
Forum: True Stories for Adults
Topic: After Andrea...Thais F/F
Replies: 27
Views: 37131

Re: After Andrea...Thais F/F

This provides good insight. It is well written and paints vivid pictures. Have you written any fiction. If so, I would like to read it.