Stories of Tie Up Games

Well... Kate Beckett is also married but has her bondage sexy time with Anna from time to time and Richard Castle apparently not only knows about it but enjoys knowing about it? So Mr Reichenbach is not taken into consideration by Sophie. (Still... I'd say it would add a good conflict for the charac...

I just want to mention that this is THE FIRST TIME we actually get to see Sarah McKenzie stealing art stuff. During the main story, we've seen her capturing people, picking locks, even killing people... but never stealing art. It's good to see an art thief doing her profession. Great short story, go...

Well, look at that twist. Sweet Becky puts her knowledge of the Happy Trails universe to some good use. Nice. I wasn't expecting to see Wild Nellie falling that quickly, but it's intriguing. Sweet Becky is also smart, as she knows she cannot trust Shy Sarah. Not sure if there will be another twist s...

Nice chapter. So that's what the teens do between missions. When the story started, I thought it was going to be mission after mission. But now it feels more like a camp. Great. It's a good contrast to see how most of the other teens seem to enjoy the activities but not Giselle. It makes her stand o...

More plot again. Good. Evie's emotion (pushing Christine to get to Amanda) is the right call. Well done there. It shows really concern from Evie towards Amanda, and it was really important to establish that connection, specially because these characters are the newest in the cast. About capturing An...

I'd have to say that I didn't recognize the "Carter" last name here, which I think it's good. Every time a character is presented to another character, it feels a little Game of Thrones, with the list of titles coming along. Except this story is set in a more real world (not the real world...

Here it is. I'll hold more flashbacks for the moment being, so the story can focus better on the showdown at Karissa's apartment =). Part 34: PRESENT DAY “I hope that taught you enough.” Stephanie said. She patted Karissa’s bottom twice and pushed her off her lap. Due to the fact that Stephanie had ...

No Bondage, but that does not hurt, on the contrary: The first half delivers more background for Stephanies actions later, as she overhears Floria and Camilla. And Camilla did nothing to strenghten Florias conviction to talk to Karissa, or that treating Stephanie that way was a mistake. It is all a...

Nice part. The background and two timelines really helps to bring the story alive. I also like that Camilla is finally losing her shit. That makes me think she is not thinking rationally anymore, so trouble is ahead. Thank you. Ah yes, Cami is snapping. Too kind for too long (and to the wrong peopl...

Aha! Exposition! Exposition well done! Most of the time, I find authors (including myself) dying to tell the readers about the world they created. And most of the time, including said information in chapters where said info is not necessary. Not in this case. It did matter here and we learn more abo...

Ok ok... Plot is moving back again. That's always good to read. First we have the interactions between Evie and the group. I would with 50/50: there are some very good descriptions from Evie's point of view (like when she spots Christine, Anna, Kate and the Dark Lady), which are obvious the reader c...

If I may... There are a couple of ways it can be done. But it totally depends on how the structure of the story is: - One way is to include temporary characters and explain their backstory before they are gone. A example of this is the anime Kimetsu no Yaiba: Demon Slayer, where the protagonist must...

Poor Steph, and tge girls missed a trick that night too ;) As a matter of fact... yes. Since Steph was into a fun evening-night in ropes, she wouldn't have minded if one of the girls (or both) played with her. A missed opportunity. Damn, Floria and Karissa really dropped the ball on that one. Someh...

In some places, for example the military, cults or certain academic schools, they expect that a rough treatment at the start will higher that bad and increase the performance. I had the same idea here. Make a task look easy, and let them fail to break them and be able to build their idwntity from s...

Nice, nice, nice! There are so many things to mention here: - First, the idea of people joining the Happy Trails game as a escape from real world. But man, that means many things. At first we saw people joining for the horses, the pets, the ranches, for bounty hunt... Now we have people who join jus...

Mmm... As much as I liked the change of pace after the explosion at Al Mansur's manor (after 3-4 chapters of full action, we needed that pause), I feel the pause is overextending its welcome. We had the first one (which was very cool chapter), the one with Tabea introduced into consensual bondage (w...

I've said it during the first story: I'm not a fan of Robert. Mostly I felt his inclusion in the story was with the sole purpose of giving Christine consensual intimate scenes (which we eventually got with the Dark Lady and Sieglinde, and those were better). So I'm not super excited to see a potenti...

Interesting choices. I wasn't expecting that all the contestants would fail the first test. Like it's said, maybe it was to show them the consequences of failure, but still... wasn't expecting that! Good to see Giselle using her skills. She's great at thinking under pressure. Only one question: the ...

Part 31: TWO MONTHS AND TWO WEEKS EARLIER What time is it? Where… where am I? How long as it been? Stephanie made a soft moan as she opened her light blue eyes. It took a moment for them to get used to the darkness that surrounded her. She hadn’t moved anywhere. She laid in the middle of Floria’s b...

So Karissa walked right into the trap and is at the mercy of her Nemesis again - there will be hell to pay for Karrissa. But at this point Stephanie has earned some payback. But it will be not Karissa delivering it - I guess. Stephanie is way over the top - she may have her reasons for retribution ...

I think Beaumains said it. It feels like Tabea is forced into enjoying bondage, rather that she looking to enjoy it herself. It would've been better if she was the one asking "may I touch this?", "may I try this?", "what about we do this?", instead of Anna and Christine...

While I have to admit, my desire is to find out what happened to Sweet Becky and Shy Laura, this is a nice chapter for telling us more about the world. Also, we find out what had happened to Singing Laura. Smiling Reilly looks like a reasonable fellow: keeping his costumers tied up so there is no mo...

Part 30: PRESENT DAY The shower had relaxed her body. After one morning full of training, then trapped into a straitjacket with a crotch strap, forced into another apartment, tickled and with ice cubes melting on her pants… the shower was the one moment of the day they Karissa felt at ease. The wat...

First of all: The row between Karissa and Floria is excellently done in every aspect and it adds a lot of background to the story, why Floria and Karissa´s Friendship detoriated so badly. And we see different sides of Floria and Karissa: First of all Karissa tried to be reasonable that I found unsu...

Good chapter! So much to say about this one: First, for me it's odd that they keep thinking about Sarah's redemption. I've stated before: I'm sure Peter has family and friends who won't be happy to see her killer free (not to mention... the foreign police?). Additionally, all Sarah did to redeem her...