Stories of Tie Up Games

@Nainur and @GreyLord that was quite the epic battle you came up with - excellent. The colonists almost careless approach remind of General Custer at Little Big Horn. But the chapter ends with a perfect cliffhanger. I also liked the Shakespeare quote! I can hardly wait for the conclusion! Thanks. H...

... I suggest one mortar to a wagon with twenty-five shells each. Train your mortar crews and have them march close to their wagon so the mortars can be deployed rapidly. Interesting that they are using larger mortars. Would have expected smaller hand ones. Not sure how they plan to engage at long ...

Thank you kindly, [mention]Caesar73[/mention] !

[mention]GreyLord[/mention] , you are very, very welcome

thank you kindly, [mention]BlissfulMisery[/mention]

As usual there are many things to be said about this chapter, let me name a few: There is the conversation between Sheila and Hunter at the beginning for instance. My personal favourite: The dance, or actually both dances :) The dance of the Creek women is written execellently: While reading I coud...

ooooohhhh, poor Georgina's predicament is a teasing read causing mental pictures to appear. Excellent stuff. Hopefully, she will be saved. Hopefully, in due course (i.e.: not at once )

BlissfulMisery should use are their writing skills on a story of their own, I for one am getting tired of all the "short story" comments from them. I disagree. Rather [mention]Caesar73[/mention] has the right of it, in my opinion. Also, [mention]BlissfulMisery[/mention] already published ...

RopeBunny wrote: ↑1 year ago ...
One more girl to find. And then I can come back to talk for all time.

I am definitly looking forward to it!

...Personally, I am leery of stories about special/extraordinary people who seem to have no flaws, just because they feel less relatable/interesting. ... On a sadder note, perhaps the reason she has spent so much effort coming up with fantasies and daydreams about her parents is the simple fact tha...

carrying on the tale. It should be appreciated even when lacking action and tie-ups. So well written.

wolfman wrote: ↑1 year ago This story is the perfect illustration of the concept that being submissive, doesn't mean being weak.

Maddie is strong willed and knows her own mind, but chooses to submit, making a conscious decision to give hetself as opposed to being taken.

A fascinating read

That's the intention, indeed.

GreyLord wrote: ↑1 year ago While this goes beyond my normal comfort level, I must acknowledge that it is extremely well written. Your descriptions are very detailed and clear. I do not see any area here for misunderstanding. Well done again, @BlissfulMisery.

I agree. Tense, very tense.., but well written, indeed.

this is sad, but does happen. I am not sorry for reading, no time wasting at all. Go on with new ideas when you find your motivation again...

tickletied84 wrote: ↑1 year ago Wonderfully written. A great description of the conflicting sensations that she's undergoing. Bravo!

Exactly!

Aftermath of huge and bloody action, surely prequal to more. Excellent read!

you are so very good in creating a vibe of mystery, spine tingling intensity and foreshadowing the actual capture...
brilliant.

Normally, I do not reply until a couple of days have passed after posting a chapter. Your issue calls for an exception. Without giving away the story, I can only say that the issue you raise will be answered completely as the story progresses. Thank you for your comment, @Caesar73. [mention]Caesar7...

Thank you, [mention]BlissfulMisery[/mention], that you re-joined the wagon here...

Caesar73 wrote: ↑1 year ago ...
I will try. I was thinking about Maddie feels in her new relationship. "Adapt" was maybe not the correct term though.

Oh, I got that. Well, this will be revealed in the next one or two chapters. But I fail to see the issue. Do you think she is in doubt what's best course, or what?

Caesar73 wrote: ↑1 year ago .... remains to be seen though how Maddie will adapt to their relationshio ...

Could you explain this "question", please? Do you doubt it's consensual, now?

Caesar73 wrote: ↑1 year ago I have to admit: It is a heartwarming sight that Jordan Archer and Maddie are so close now. Who would have thought, that the broken despirited Jordan would find his Maddie - again.

...very much to the point. At least concerning Jordan.

again, yet again, intriguing action looming!

It is so great a story-telling!
The banter ... the cockyness ... the chaotic approach... excellent. Where's the video?

That's - yet again - a wonderful scenery of capture and dominating. Love it.