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by MisterB
3 months ago
Forum: Only 100 words
Topic: Let's make that Only 1000 words!
Replies: 26
Views: 25708

Re: Let's make that Only 1000 words!

Wow, second place! Thanks for the recognition, and for all the great entries in this contest. I might spin my entry out into a few additional stories- but I'd welcome anyone else who'd like to pick up the ideas and run with them.
by MisterB
5 months ago
Forum: Only 100 words
Topic: Let's make that Only 1000 words!
Replies: 26
Views: 25708

Re: Let's make that Only 1000 words!

Method Acting (M/f) by MisterB I watched Abby demolish the breakfast special, the morning sun catching her blonde hair as we sat in the corner booth of the otherwise empty diner. “Best breakfast in Hollywood, kid,” I smiled as she mopped up the syrup with the last of her pancakes. She was the pictur...
by MisterB
11 months ago
Forum: Fictional Stories For Everyone
Topic: First Ties Part 3 (m/f) (tickling, hogtied)
Replies: 3
Views: 2753

Re: First Ties Part 3

Looking forward to the next chapter!
by MisterB
1 year ago
Forum: Fictional Stories For Everyone
Topic: Night Night (M/mfMF)
Replies: 1
Views: 2239

Re: Night Night (M/mfMF)

I like that you're mixing things up a bit!
by MisterB
4 years ago
Forum: Fictional Stories For Everyone
Topic: A chaotic babysitting experience. mmff/you...you/mmff
Replies: 5
Views: 9155

Re: A chaotic babysitting experience. mmff/you...you/mmff

A nice first story! The advice I'd offer is to slow down and take your time with telling the story. I really wanted more (which is a sign you've written a good story), but it felt like you rushed past a lot of details that could have been really fun to read.
by MisterB
4 years ago
Forum: Fictional Stories For Everyone
Topic: Victoria's ransom mishap F/f
Replies: 19
Views: 26357

Re: Victoria's ransom mishap F/f

Great story so far- looking forward to more (when you're ready of course)