I didn’t notice whilst reading, only afterwards. Once I did, it tickled meSeriously? Oh crap, I had no idea... Well, I can't speak for anyone else, but I think Ingrid would be inclined to think so.
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I'll bet! Tell you the truth, when I first read that, I wasn't sure whether to think it was hilarious or horrible. But in the end, so? Let's just consider it some kind of perverted serendipity.Boundcurious wrote: ↑3 years ago I didn’t notice whilst reading, only afterwards. Once I did, it tickled me
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Hilarious. I’m 100% team hilarious!NotSeen wrote: ↑3 years agoI'll bet! Tell you the truth, when I first read that, I wasn't sure whether to think it was hilarious or horrible. But in the end, so? Let's just consider it some kind of perverted serendipity.Boundcurious wrote: ↑3 years ago I didn’t notice whilst reading, only afterwards. Once I did, it tickled me
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I am sorry if I made you feel awkward though
No need to apologize. Looking back on it, it is hilarious.
Excellent wrap up a well-told story. I like how you explained the background and how the escape was affected. Her comeuppance at the end was great and I'm intrigued by the people se t to punish Evelyn. Great story!
Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it.
...and who knows, should you stick around, you might run into some of them at some point down the road...
Although this story invludes a lot more pain/BDSM than I usually read, I enjoyed the story a lot. The lack of unncessary details mdae the story fast-paced but without feeling like younjust described scenes without any "real" characters. A few good plottwists and well-timed explanations helped a lot. Thanks a lot!
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Thank _you_! I'm very pleased to hear that the story was good enough to keep your interest despite not really being the kind you like. Frankly, that is high praise indeed.Beaumains wrote: ↑3 years ago Although this story invludes a lot more pain/BDSM than I usually read, I enjoyed the story a lot. The lack of unncessary details mdae the story fast-paced but without feeling like younjust described scenes without any "real" characters. A few good plottwists and well-timed explanations helped a lot. Thanks a lot!
Many thanks for reading and especially taking the time to comment.
I am most certainly sticking around!!! No doubt about that at all!
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such a good story!
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such a good story!
Thank you! Glad you enjoyed it!
That was another GREAt story! Man, I love your writing. Very detailed to the point where the reader is "there" in the moment watching things happen. Fantastic!