Tales in Briloven (mm/F, m/f, mmm/fF, F/mm, F/F, m/m and more), Chapter 8 - Spy Game (F/m)
Great chapter! Can't wait for what's next!
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Interesting idea.
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Thank you [mention]slackywacky[/mention] [mention]Mommy's Naughty Boy[/mention] [mention]tieupfan[/mention] [mention]harveygasson[/mention]
Please feel free to read and comment your thoughts.
My ongoing stories:
Roadtrip of Dreams (M/F) Chapter 14 Added.
My ongoing stories:
Roadtrip of Dreams (M/F) Chapter 14 Added.
Just caught up with the story. Great Job charliesmith!
Just read the first page so far, so I don't know if anybody mentioned it in the meantime, but the irregular switching between past and present tense can be quite irritating. Choose one and stick to it ![Wink ;)](./images/smilies/icon_e_wink.gif)
Either way, starting out interestingly![Smile :)](./images/smilies/icon_e_smile.gif)
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Either way, starting out interestingly
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Meet Jessica in the Garage, Alica the baby-sitter, Phillip tieing up teen girls
Adult Stories: Naughty Tamara, Josefine the Model (all M/F)
Feedback motivates me to write more and continue a story![Smile :)](./images/smilies/icon_e_smile.gif)
Adult Stories: Naughty Tamara, Josefine the Model (all M/F)
Feedback motivates me to write more and continue a story
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I really liked the story.
Too bad it war just left as it is
Too bad it war just left as it is