Tales in Briloven (mm/F, m/f, mmm/fF, F/mm, F/F, m/m and more), Chapter 8 - Spy Game (F/m)
Great chapter! Can't wait for what's next!
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Interesting idea. [mention]GreyLord[/mention]
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My ongoing stories:
Roadtrip of Dreams (M/F) Chapter 14 Added.
My ongoing stories:
Roadtrip of Dreams (M/F) Chapter 14 Added.
Just caught up with the story. Great Job charliesmith!
Just read the first page so far, so I don't know if anybody mentioned it in the meantime, but the irregular switching between past and present tense can be quite irritating. Choose one and stick to it
Either way, starting out interestingly
Either way, starting out interestingly
Meet Jessica in the Garage, Alica the baby-sitter, Phillip tieing up teen girls
Adult Stories: Naughty Tamara, Josefine the Model (all M/F)
Feedback motivates me to write more and continue a story
Adult Stories: Naughty Tamara, Josefine the Model (all M/F)
Feedback motivates me to write more and continue a story
I really liked the story.
Too bad it war just left as it is
Too bad it war just left as it is