"Uhh, is that okay?" And "Uhm, yeah! Okay"
Really sums up the level of detail this story has.
Quite alot of other people would write "Shawn wraps duct tape around Stevens chest and ankles" and be done with it.
I much rather this
Indeed you will. Everything on your profile indicates that this is the story for you. Besides, seeing as how you're enjoying "College Dorm Slave" I think it's safe to say Steven's tale will be right up your alley. Keep us posted on your progress, boi. A popular way of reviewing this is simply to drop a comment whenever you have something to say (no matter what part of the story you're at) and specify which chapter or scene you're reviewing. I'm sure you'll be enjoying some of Steven's predicaments even more than Jesse's.Tomat0skins wrote: ↑2 years ago Absolutely love what I've read so far! Definitely going to have to give the whole work a sequential read-thru though.
I had to think a bit about this poll, I've never stopped to think about what I think of Shawn, so I had to organize my thoughts about Nick's handsome cousin.bondagefreak wrote: ↑3 years ago
THE NEW POLL
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SHAWN
THE HAMMER
CHAOTIC NEUTRAL
Showing predisposition for neither good nor evil, Shawn presents the protagonist with a truly puzzling dilemma. Shawn proves himself a force to be reckoned with when he helps Nick in carrying out Brad's forceful arrest. On the flip side, the overly buff muscle oaf also shows himself capable of far less noble pursuits when he blackmails Steven into performing sexual favours and attempts to force the issue. Although a formal apology has yet to be given, our protagonist does take note of the fact that Shawn treated him with fairness during most of his three-day stay at the college apartment.
Though not particularly wordy nor intelligent, Shawn has several pertinent and surprisingly positive exchanges with Steven over the course of the sixth book, resulting in the two of them sleeping in the same bed for the final night of the babysitting episode. Keeping in mind Shawn's blunt edges, his ham-fisted nature and his tendency to swing either for good or for evil depending on who is "wielding" him, our blond and blue-eyed beefcake takes on the nickname of THE HAMMER; a powerful, if somewhat cumbersome tool that can be used either to build up or to demolish.
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Haha, we all know by now that Steven has a little bit of a problem looking ahead for the consequences
I'm so glad to see you're still making your way through the seventh book. Seeing as how you just came across the Shawn approval rating poll, that puts you somewhere around chapter 280. You're almost fully caught up! As for the rating of 7 that you gave him, that brings his overall average score up to 6.4. I definitely enjoyed your analysis of Shawn.
Welcome to the adventure, kiddo! I'm glad to see you reading this properly and from the beginning this time.Tomat0skins wrote: ↑2 years ago Just binged through the first 16 chapters. I have to say I feel terribly for Steven being thrown into the deep end so unprepared to deal with it. But at the same time, unfff, nothing gets me off like the kind of cruel domination he's being treated to. The brat and the masochist in me would be having an absolute field day incurring as much wrath as possible from Nick and Brad!I can't get enough of your incredibly detailed descriptions of Steven's various gags. Those stranger's briefs from Brad sounds like an incredible gag, and of course Nick's socks and sneakers sound HEAVENLY!
Hey buddy-boi. You bring up an interesting point about communication. As far as Nick potentially being miffed by Steven serving Shawn's feet, I'm of the opinion that Book III may provide some enlightening insight. More specifically CHAPTER 70 - THE LOAN
Hey buddy-boi. My answer to the first question will remain a little ambivalent because no clear parameters have been set. At least none that Steven knows of. To the first question, my answer would be that Shawn most likely has no interest in edging Steven. Remember that everything he's attempted to do with Steven has mostly been for his own gratification. If such a thing were to happen without Nick being involved though, Nick would undoubtedly be miffed. Zack would most likely have that sort of leeway, but not Shawn.