Caught (f/ff)
8 chapters is a good size story. Each chapter was well written and descriptive. You never dragged on, each chapter told a part of the story perfectly. You have gift when it comes to writting at only 15.
Totally agree with the post above. It was a good fun story, good idea though, to end it there.
You can always write another story, with the same characters.
Well done, and thanks for letting us take part.
You can always write another story, with the same characters.
Well done, and thanks for letting us take part.
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I liked the interaction, and I agree it was the perfect length.