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Open to new things FF/F, etc.
Posted: Fri May 29, 2020 5:49 am
by NoOne
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Re: Open to new things FF/F, etc.
Posted: Fri May 29, 2020 8:07 am
by Caesar73
Rebecca surely regrets her decision by now
Hmmm ... and what will the big white ball be used for?
Good second part, the twins enjoy that too much
Re: Open to new things FF/F, etc.
Posted: Fri May 29, 2020 3:38 pm
by slackywacky
The update made it even better. Great story.
p.s. you might want to change this line: "At this point, I knew I wasn’t going to get loose until my daughter came back from the store."
Re: Open to new things FF/F, etc.
Posted: Fri May 29, 2020 6:38 pm
by Caesar73
Absolutely! How Rebecca fights, how the twins react? Beautifully told!
Re: Open to new things FF/F, etc.
Posted: Sat May 30, 2020 5:00 am
by NoOne
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Re: Open to new things FF/F, etc.
Posted: Sat May 30, 2020 6:11 am
by Alisonlovesropes
Very well written, descriptions of bondage and feelings of the protagonist. Excellent.
Re: Open to new things FF/F, etc.
Posted: Sat May 30, 2020 6:46 am
by NoOne
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Re: Open to new things FF/F, etc.
Posted: Sat May 30, 2020 7:27 am
by CapturedCarol
Aunty ups the anti. I rather hope this effort proves futile and things get worse for Rebecca.
Re: Open to new things FF/F, etc.
Posted: Sat May 30, 2020 7:31 am
by NoOne
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Re: Open to new things FF/F, etc.
Posted: Sat May 30, 2020 7:43 am
by Caesar73
This story gets better - with every part! The Interaction between the characters is great. And a nice Ending! I wonder though, if Rebeccas Initiative pays off
If not, then the twins will resort to more stringent measures. I wonder, if Rebecca has a plan
It is a very impressive story - interessting characters! I wonder, if the twins know any bounds ....the line serms thin.
Re: Open to new things FF/F, etc.
Posted: Sat May 30, 2020 7:45 am
by Caesar73
And I wouldn't mind, if Rebecca loses her Slippers and the tickling goes on
Re: Open to new things FF/F, etc.
Posted: Sat May 30, 2020 7:28 pm
by NoOne
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Re: Open to new things FF/F, etc.
Posted: Sun May 31, 2020 8:26 am
by Caesar73
This part was different. No bondage. But that did not hurt. We learned a lot about Rebecca. The Dialogue between aunt and nice was very well scripted. Rebecca is ressourceful and clever. I enjoyed that she striked back. Indeed the game is on another Level now. The Characters are very interessting. Great work! And I'm curious what happens next!!!
Re: Open to new things FF/F, etc.
Posted: Sun May 31, 2020 11:45 am
by dogrednuht123
great story. you are a great writer. can't wait to read the next part.
Re: Open to new things FF/F, etc.
Posted: Sun May 31, 2020 12:27 pm
by Caesar73
And I like the Idea of a Hunt
The Twins hunting Rebecca sounds like fun! I wonder how long the twins will need to "capture" their prey
Re: Open to new things FF/F, etc.
Posted: Sun May 31, 2020 11:18 pm
by tickletied84
This is working really well NoOne - describing the mix of emotions, thoughts, physical feelings.
Am hoping this continues and there's more positions that Rebecca ends up in!
Re: Open to new things FF/F, etc.
Posted: Thu Jun 04, 2020 10:00 am
by Caesar73
Looking forward to the continuing Adventures of Rebecca
Re: Open to new things FF/F, etc.
Posted: Tue Jun 16, 2020 4:42 am
by Caesar73
I wonder how long the twins need, to hunt Rebecca down - and what punishment will follow
Re: Open to new things FF/F, etc.
Posted: Sat Aug 01, 2020 9:50 am
by Caesar73
I'm sooo thrilled, it will be fun, when the Twins will hunt Rebecca
Re: Open to new things FF/F, etc.
Posted: Thu Aug 06, 2020 2:51 am
by Switcher1313
Wow! How could I have missed this story! Well done! Hope you continue!
Re: Open to new things FF/F, etc.
Posted: Sat Sep 26, 2020 12:16 am
by NoOne
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Re: Open to new things FF/F, etc.
Posted: Sat Sep 26, 2020 7:15 am
by Caesar73
So glad, you are back !! A blockade must be horrible. Good luck!
So Rebecca got caught soon - the Trap of the twins was clever.
Now Rebecca will have to pay the price. The twins really do deserve some taste of their own medicine at some point
Re: Open to new things FF/F, etc.
Posted: Sat Sep 26, 2020 8:10 am
by NoOne
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Re: Open to new things FF/F, etc.
Posted: Sat Sep 26, 2020 8:56 am
by Caesar73
I understand your problem
But there may be a solution: The Twins seem to hold all the aces, true. They are very full of themselves. And here may be a chance for Rebecca at some point. Confidence itself is a good thing, but becoming overconfident is a weakness, the twins underestimated Rebecca once, Why not again?
Another idea: The Introduction of new a character? Or Rebeccas Sister returns prematurely?
Just thinking
Re: Open to new things FF/F, etc.
Posted: Sat Sep 26, 2020 9:08 am
by Caesar73
Further on: The Twins may develop more Empathy, and strike some Deal with Rebecca, or thex turn on each other?