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When We Are Alone (?/? Suit yourselves)

Posted: Mon Jan 08, 2024 10:19 pm
by Xtc
OK, just to celebrate the newly enabled site, I thought I should post a load of smut. Sorry, I meant I should post a piece of poetic, literary significance.

Here it comes:

Re: When We Are Alone (?/? Suit yourselves)

Posted: Mon Jan 08, 2024 10:22 pm
by Xtc
When We Are Alone

You expect me to say how much I love you
And I would.

You want me to caress you
As though you would fall apart if I did not
And certainly I would.

You demand that I say that you are beautiful
And so I should
Because you are.

So, if only I could . . .

Now drag me to your bed
And kiss my cruelly gagged mouth
And play with me
Until I wish my arms had not been bound.

Play with me until I need to come
Play with me all the while I cannot see you
In the knowledge that, at last, I will get relief

Then take me inside of you
And, after we have both striven,
And I am almost spent
Our exertions will pay dividends

You won’t hear my sigh when it happens
Or even see my cross-eyed squint
So let us lie
Close coupled;
I’m in no hurry to withdraw.

The feel of your body so close,
Your scent,
Your softness,
And my helplessness
All make me melt

So do not free me,
Not ‘til morning,
Nor until you want me next.

Not all of our dreams are the same
But mine of you keep me sane.
So stay close to me,
Breathe in my scent
Keep me safe,
And I will say how much I love you in the morning.

Re: When We Are Alone (?/? Suit yourselves)

Posted: Mon Jan 08, 2024 10:56 pm
by tiedinbluetights
I love poetry. This is beautiful, and I'm glad it is ?/?, just two individuals, sharing a wonderful TUG, perfectly capturing the Dom/Sub dynamic from the Sub's view.

Thanks for posting this !

Re: When We Are Alone (?/? Suit yourselves)

Posted: Mon Jan 08, 2024 10:59 pm
by Xtc
Thank you for that. I'm not sure how it will be accepted here.

Re: When We Are Alone (?/? Suit yourselves)

Posted: Sat Jan 13, 2024 12:33 am
by Boundcurious
Not normally a big fan of poetry, but that felt fresh and different to the norm on here so I really enjoyed it. Thank you 😊

Re: When We Are Alone (?/? Suit yourselves)

Posted: Sat Jan 13, 2024 2:49 am
by StringTheorist
Thank you @Xtc

Very nice poem. I am a fan of different types of expression.

I hope that you write more like this.

ST

Re: When We Are Alone (?/? Suit yourselves)

Posted: Sat Jan 13, 2024 5:43 am
by LunaDog
Xtc wrote: 4 months ago Thank you for that. I'm not sure how it will be accepted here.
Well, i for one enjoyed it. can't be fairer than that, i guess.

Re: When We Are Alone (?/? Suit yourselves)

Posted: Sat Jan 13, 2024 1:13 pm
by Xtc
@Boundcurious, in that case, I am especially grateful that you reacted. Thank you.

@StringTheorist, Thanks for that. Not my normal form of poetic expression but it just had to be done.

@LunaDog, indeed, you can't be! Thank you.

Re: When We Are Alone (?/? Suit yourselves)

Posted: Sat Jan 13, 2024 2:42 pm
by TightropesEU
Thanks for sharing this. Love bondage poems.

Re: When We Are Alone (?/? Suit yourselves)

Posted: Sat Jan 13, 2024 3:34 pm
by Xtc
You're welcome, @TightropesEU, but thank you for the response.

Re: When We Are Alone (?/? Suit yourselves)

Posted: Sat Jan 13, 2024 3:35 pm
by blackbound
Agreeing - it's brief and fun.

Re: When We Are Alone (?/? Suit yourselves)

Posted: Sat Jan 13, 2024 3:36 pm
by Xtc
Fun was the idea. Thanks, @blackbound.

Re: When We Are Alone (?/? Suit yourselves)

Posted: Sat Jan 13, 2024 9:06 pm
by MaxRoper
You are an amazing man.
Thanks for sharing your work.
(It's not even sort of smut)

Re: When We Are Alone (?/? Suit yourselves)

Posted: Sat Jan 13, 2024 9:29 pm
by Xtc
Thank you (*blushes*) It was supposed to be rather beautiful. Fortunately, some people think it is.

Re: When We Are Alone (?/? Suit yourselves)

Posted: Sat Jan 13, 2024 9:31 pm
by Xtc
Thank you. (*blushes*) It was supposed to be rather beautiful. Fortunately, some people think it is.

Re: When We Are Alone (?/? Suit yourselves)

Posted: Sun Jan 14, 2024 12:22 am
by Switcher1313
Ah poetry! So refreshing and well crafted, I must say! Good job!

Re: When We Are Alone (?/? Suit yourselves)

Posted: Sun Jan 14, 2024 1:40 pm
by Xtc
Thank you.
I'm intrigued: people have been kind enough to support this piece but the posts have only just appeared. Odd.
Thanks again, all support is welcome.

Re: When We Are Alone (?/? Suit yourselves)

Posted: Mon Jan 15, 2024 12:42 am
by Paris_bondage
Magnifique !

Re: When We Are Alone (?/? Suit yourselves)

Posted: Mon Jan 15, 2024 6:13 am
by Xtc
Merci.