....
....
Last edited by RopeBunny 4 months ago, edited 1 time in total.
....
Last edited by RopeBunny 4 months ago, edited 1 time in total.
....
Last edited by RopeBunny 4 months ago, edited 1 time in total.
Do please continue @RopeBunny - the Entry Chapters are intruiging - and since I don´t know the first attempt - I read it with fresh eyes ![Smile :)](./images/smilies/icon_e_smile.gif)
![Smile :)](./images/smilies/icon_e_smile.gif)
....
Last edited by RopeBunny 4 months ago, edited 1 time in total.
....
Last edited by RopeBunny 4 months ago, edited 1 time in total.
....
Last edited by RopeBunny 4 months ago, edited 1 time in total.
- BlissfulMisery
- Centennial Club
- Posts: 301
- Joined: 2 years ago
Am glad to see a continuation of sorts - the previous story ended suddenly on a bit of a cliffhanger with no real resolution. Obviously I do not expect the new story to directly address that, but I thought it was a nice concept that could use further exploration.
I also really like the excerpt from the article you included - a great way to provide backstory in an engaging way.
And it seems things are kicking off quite quickly on the second part... Lucille playing matchmaker perhaps?![Razz :P](./images/smilies/icon_razz.gif)
Honestly both of them took the whole thing very much in stride. Then again, what is one to do when living in a haunted house?![Smile :)](./images/smilies/icon_e_smile.gif)
Excited to see what new (or possibly old) direction you end up taking this 'reboot'!
-
But if you have forgotten, well, it just means more surprises for you I suppose![Smile :)](./images/smilies/icon_e_smile.gif)
![Laughing :lol:](./images/smilies/icon_lol.gif)
I also really like the excerpt from the article you included - a great way to provide backstory in an engaging way.
And it seems things are kicking off quite quickly on the second part... Lucille playing matchmaker perhaps?
![Razz :P](./images/smilies/icon_razz.gif)
Honestly both of them took the whole thing very much in stride. Then again, what is one to do when living in a haunted house?
![Smile :)](./images/smilies/icon_e_smile.gif)
Excited to see what new (or possibly old) direction you end up taking this 'reboot'!
-
Actually you have read and commented on the previous version of this story (I had to double check to make sure I was not going crazy, but there it was: viewtopic.php?f=8&t=18556&start=50).
But if you have forgotten, well, it just means more surprises for you I suppose
![Smile :)](./images/smilies/icon_e_smile.gif)
-
- Centennial Club
- Posts: 706
- Joined: 5 years ago
Like @Caesar73 I was not too familiar with the original. However this has been a really impressive read so far.
I like the style of writing and there are so many twists and turns this could take. The excerpts with the backstory too provide a lot of background information without it becoming a book in itself.
Looking forward to the next part and finding out more about this kinky haunted house. Nicely done!![Smile :)](./images/smilies/icon_e_smile.gif)
I like the style of writing and there are so many twists and turns this could take. The excerpts with the backstory too provide a lot of background information without it becoming a book in itself.
Looking forward to the next part and finding out more about this kinky haunted house. Nicely done!
![Smile :)](./images/smilies/icon_e_smile.gif)
And it won't, this is a start from scratch using some of what I wrote before, but twisted into a new thing.BlissfulMisery wrote: ↑5 months ago Obviously I do not expect the new story to directly address that, but I thought it was a nice concept that could use further exploration.
BlissfulMisery wrote: ↑5 months ago
Excited to see what new (or possibly old) direction you end up taking this 'reboot'!
Thank you both, next chapters below.Bigballgag1 wrote: ↑5 months ago
Looking forward to the next part and finding out more about this kinky haunted house. Nicely done!![]()
....
Last edited by RopeBunny 4 months ago, edited 1 time in total.
....
Last edited by RopeBunny 4 months ago, edited 1 time in total.
....
Last edited by RopeBunny 4 months ago, edited 1 time in total.
- BlissfulMisery
- Centennial Club
- Posts: 301
- Joined: 2 years ago
I am really enjoying the partial return of the 'documentary/found footage style' in the intermissions.
And it seems Lucille is not done with her 'victim'. Wonder if she will force the issue - or if she has a different game in mind.
And it seems Lucille is not done with her 'victim'. Wonder if she will force the issue - or if she has a different game in mind.
It's a style I enjoy. Not just the 'found footage/video' stuff but the general story theme of breaking chapters up with passages from books or message exchanges/phonecalls. It's my new favourite way to writeBlissfulMisery wrote: ↑5 months ago I am really enjoying the partial return of the 'documentary/found footage style' in the intermissions.
![Very Happy :D](./images/smilies/icon_e_biggrin.gif)
As for Lucille, more below, soon.
....
Last edited by RopeBunny 4 months ago, edited 1 time in total.
....
Last edited by RopeBunny 4 months ago, edited 1 time in total.
....
Last edited by RopeBunny 4 months ago, edited 1 time in total.
- BlissfulMisery
- Centennial Club
- Posts: 301
- Joined: 2 years ago
Well I suppose it is 'unintentional matchmaker' then for Lucille!
The disjointed 'ghost logic' is interesting to follow too - it was present in the previous story of course, but it does nicely explain her erratic behavior.
Although interesting that she used El's equipment - no magical ghost ropes.
Waste not, want not, I suppose.
And it is a little amusing how both El and Sal really want to be the one tied up. Well, at least they are now roughly on the same page - I suppose being forced to interact and actually communicating helps!
But at this rate they will be asking Lucille to tie them both up together![Laughing :lol:](./images/smilies/icon_lol.gif)
The disjointed 'ghost logic' is interesting to follow too - it was present in the previous story of course, but it does nicely explain her erratic behavior.
Although interesting that she used El's equipment - no magical ghost ropes.
Waste not, want not, I suppose.
And it is a little amusing how both El and Sal really want to be the one tied up. Well, at least they are now roughly on the same page - I suppose being forced to interact and actually communicating helps!
But at this rate they will be asking Lucille to tie them both up together
![Laughing :lol:](./images/smilies/icon_lol.gif)
BlissfulMisery wrote: ↑5 months ago
And it is a little amusing how both El and Sal really want to be the one tied up. Well, at least they are now roughly on the same page - I suppose being forced to interact and actually communicating helps!
But at this rate they will be asking Lucille to tie them both up together![]()
![Laughing :lol:](./images/smilies/icon_lol.gif)
....
Last edited by RopeBunny 4 months ago, edited 1 time in total.
- BlissfulMisery
- Centennial Club
- Posts: 301
- Joined: 2 years ago
![Laughing :lol:](./images/smilies/icon_lol.gif)
Seems Lucille can just never catch a break when it comes to getting her chance in the spotlight
![Razz :P](./images/smilies/icon_razz.gif)
But I understand the feeling of getting caught up in a new/different idea - better to let the river sweep you away then to try and fight the current.
Always a wise move
![Smile :)](./images/smilies/icon_e_smile.gif)