mrjones2009 wrote: ↑8 months ago
Chris is back and certain people should watch out!
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I would think so, too!
Again a well tempered, slow story-telling full of respect, befitting the occasion. Well, it will explode soon...
(bad choice of word, I know, but maybe not)
It is about time to expressing my admiration how wonderfully exceptional art - true to the general title - has been included in this touching tale once more. And how all those characters are displayed as people I can well imagine them to be true.
Just a damn fine read.
Caesar73 wrote: ↑8 months ago
Barbara´s disbelief is very well displayed.
Exactly my main impression, also. Excellently done, very believable I thought. Now, where do we go from here...? Am sure @GreyLord will deliver the answer in due course of time.
now, that was intense... and remains so. Excellently done. very much so. You captured feelings, sentiments and emotion oh! so very well here. And I am totally okay with *drama* instead of *realism*.
“But my master, the strappado can be such a fun position,” Carol giggled. And it was. Carol is almost brain-washed, isn't she? Much fun, though. Really, I am still amazed by it. And we return to the SF-stuff, also? Contact to Earth maybe to be established again? Wow. You know to keep at least one r...
Caesar73 wrote: ↑9 months ago
And the quest continues!
And, indeed, it does!
tbh.:
twice for me, for had to re-read it: all those places and names. No complaint, though, on the contrary: what an effort by you - hail, caesar! Awesome read!
Stella and Madie being some kind of relatives? WOW. There must be some kind of time capsule or even time travel involved. Madie and Jordan didn't have Kids. You just killed her to early (You ....). I really want to know how this can happen! @GreyLord I want to know! But they did. Even a few, as it ...
"You are aware, of course, that the results from our testing of Stella Brooks' DNA have been completed. Stella is a decedent of Madeline Archer. Interestingly, you bots sensed something about her after your brief contact with her. It is perplexing that we find this in Stella because it is impo...
Just finished and Oh My What a great Story. Congrats on this one @GreyLord ! If Maddie or Jordan would have been killed I would have killed you @GreyLord . It sad enough when Maddie 1 died. Drove me to tears. well, creating feelings is part of the job. Joy or sorrow, triumph or revenge... and-and-a...
Argentum wrote: ↑9 months ago
Great Chapter, as always. I love the way, Carol tied up Sella and I guess she would have been in for a very long night. But, dmnd, whose hand is interfering???
very good comment! Very intriguing chapter as always!
Jeeves and the bots. We learn more about the sisent between the Johanssens and Unihold. And we learn how formidable opponents those 'Myrmidons" are.
Stella is in deep sh*t! What - a -suspense!
oh, yes, and some brilliantly described courtship scenes as well! Great stuff.
Bandit666 wrote: ↑10 months ago
Thank you a new update will arrive soon, it just became clear my initial plan for the girls and Miss Vickers needed a complete overhaul, but please be assured this tale will continue
Just take your time @Bandit666 Your humble audience will wait gladly