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by Mineira1986
11 months ago
Forum: Fictional Stories For Everyone
Topic: The Roommates - Short Stories (F+/F+) - Story 4 (Part 3)
Replies: 63
Views: 35457

Re: The Roommates - Short Stories (F+/F+) - Story 2 (Part 1)

Very nice entry :) I wonder who the two newcomers are :) Judging by Karissa´s reaction she doens´t like them. I like this format [mention]Mineira1986[/mention] Thanks! Glad you're enjoying it. There are many directions this one can go. I look forward to finding out which path the apparently demandi...
by Mineira1986
11 months ago
Forum: Fictional Stories For Everyone
Topic: In the Dungeons of the Ice Queen (F/F) (Fantasy) (Finished)
Replies: 101
Views: 50907

Re: In the Dungeons of the Ice Queen (F/F) (Fantasy) (Part 9 added)

That doesn't sound like a great plan. Kluzelda should "lend" Eyiel to another pirate and keep her away from Rhys to prevent any rescue-escape attempts (which would happen if both are on the same ship).

Alas, they won't need to worry about that since they're under attack.
by Mineira1986
11 months ago
Forum: Fictional Stories For Everyone
Topic: Spy Camp (m+f+/m+f+) Part 38
Replies: 234
Views: 113285

Re: Spy Camp (m+f+/m+f+) Part 23

Great stuff! Great descriptions. And nice picture as well.
by Mineira1986
11 months ago
Forum: Fictional Stories For Everyone
Topic: The Roommates - Short Stories (F+/F+) - Story 4 (Part 3)
Replies: 63
Views: 35457

Re: The Roommates - Short Stories (F+/F+) - Story 1 (Part 4)

Alright, time for story number 2! STORY 2: SIX MONTHS BEFORE THE ROOMMATES 1 TWO DAYS AFTER STORY 1 PART 1 Karissa zipped her sports bag and left the dressing room wearing green pants and a white long-sleeved t-shirt. Her long wavy hair was still damp from not being completely dried. She looked agai...
by Mineira1986
11 months ago
Forum: Fictional Stories For Everyone
Topic: Spy Camp (m+f+/m+f+) Part 38
Replies: 234
Views: 113285

Re: Spy Camp (m+f+/m+f+) Part 22

Good for Giselle. Are these signs of something changing? I don't recall many chapters saying that Giselle "loved" or "adored" something, as it often looked like she didn't care or even dislike what was happening around. Good for her!
by Mineira1986
11 months ago
Forum: Fictional Stories For Everyone
Topic: In the Dungeons of the Ice Queen (F/F) (Fantasy) (Finished)
Replies: 101
Views: 50907

Re: In the Dungeons of the Ice Queen (F/F) (Fantasy) (Part 8 added)

Pretty intense again. Kluzelda looks like a formidable opponent. Kind of funny that after all the kind of monsters and enemies they defeated in the original story, it's a band of pirates lead by an amazon the ones that really put our heroines in trouble.
by Mineira1986
11 months ago
Forum: Fictional Stories For Everyone
Topic: The Roommates - Short Stories (F+/F+) - Story 4 (Part 3)
Replies: 63
Views: 35457

Re: The Roommates - Short Stories (F+/F+) - Story 1 (Part 3)

I don't know which is more interesting: the animosity between the two or the way Karissa feeds off of it. This chapter also does a fine job of conveying the perspective of an unwilling victim. Thanks. To be fair, I enjoy writing from the victim's perspective, even in third person. Ah, yes, Stinky s...
by Mineira1986
11 months ago
Forum: Fictional Stories For Everyone
Topic: Spy Camp (m+f+/m+f+) Part 38
Replies: 234
Views: 113285

Re: Spy Camp (m+f+/m+f+) Part 21

I would love to see more of Giselle's back story, please. Pretty please =)
by Mineira1986
11 months ago
Forum: Fictional Stories For Everyone
Topic: In the Dungeons of the Ice Queen (F/F) (Fantasy) (Finished)
Replies: 101
Views: 50907

Re: In the Dungeons of the Ice Queen (F/F) (Fantasy) (Part 7 added)

I was wondering if there were some transitivity as if Eyiel becomes Kluzelda's slave, then Rhys would become Kluzelda's slave as well, but I'm guessing amazons don't enslave each other.

Pretty intense chapter.
by Mineira1986
11 months ago
Forum: Fictional Stories For Everyone
Topic: The Roommates - Short Stories (F+/F+) - Story 4 (Part 3)
Replies: 63
Views: 35457

Re: The Roommates - Short Stories (F+/F+) - Story 1 (Part 2)

Just lovely: The banter between the two - at first it seems Floria will Windows, then her luck runs out 😀 Now the question is: Will she escape? Will she? Mmm... Ah, how these two always make a simple situation escalate into a full-blown nightmare... Perhaps it's pathological to each girl? That's an...
by Mineira1986
11 months ago
Forum: Fictional Stories For Everyone
Topic: The Roommates - Short Stories (F+/F+) - Story 4 (Part 3)
Replies: 63
Views: 35457

Re: The Roommates - Short Stories (F+/F+) - Story 1 (Part 1)

Thanks [mention]Caesar73[/mention] , [mention]AlexUSA3[/mention] , [mention]DommeKirsten[/mention] and [mention]Beaumains[/mention] for your comments! Part 2 The girls each opened a can of soda and waited in silence for the first stop. Each checked their lists. Floria bumped a fist. —Six points to f...
by Mineira1986
11 months ago
Forum: Fictional Stories For Everyone
Topic: The Visitor (F+/F+) - Appendix 1B (Story Complete)
Replies: 85
Views: 46420

Re: The Visitor (F+/F+) - Chapter 4 (May 17, 2023)

C looks pretty impossible and D, pretty difficult. I'm gonna go with B as well.

Would've chosen A, except Joy's ass is on the line, so she cannot expect any help from the outside and knowing if she's been screwed or not (because of the blindfold) sounds way too easy of a plot.
by Mineira1986
11 months ago
Forum: Fictional Stories For Everyone
Topic: Spy Camp (m+f+/m+f+) Part 38
Replies: 234
Views: 113285

Re: Spy Camp (m+f+/m+f+) Part 19

Ah, love the games. They've been a great aspect of many of your stories (Responsibility Day, Dressed at my best, The Tangled Maiden, to mention a few), and they are always fun.

Keep it coming.
by Mineira1986
11 months ago
Forum: Fictional Stories For Everyone
Topic: The Visitor (F+/F+) - Appendix 1B (Story Complete)
Replies: 85
Views: 46420

Re: The Visitor (F+/F+) - Chapter 3 (May 10, 2023)

Gotta go with B, though it would depend how imaginative Joy is.
by Mineira1986
11 months ago
Forum: Fictional Stories For Everyone
Topic: In the Dungeons of the Ice Queen (F/F) (Fantasy) (Finished)
Replies: 101
Views: 50907

Re: In the Dungeons of the Ice Queen (F/F) (Fantasy) (Part 5 added)

Good part.

Gotta go with Eyiel here: it made no sense that Ferine stalled her escape while they were attacked by the kraken and had little chances to stay alive while tied up. At the end, it mattered little as only Ferine escaped.
by Mineira1986
11 months ago
Forum: Fictional Stories For Everyone
Topic: The Roommates - Short Stories (F+/F+) - Story 4 (Part 3)
Replies: 63
Views: 35457

The Roommates - Short Stories (F+/F+) - Story 4 (Part 3)

Hello everybody. I've been in a long hiatus, trying to work out some writing projects. Decided to just go with at least one for the moment. This will be a series of "short" stories for my current cast of The Roommates (and some new characters) before the big third part. Well, "short&q...
by Mineira1986
1 year ago
Forum: Fictional Stories For Everyone
Topic: In the Dungeons of the Ice Queen (F/F) (Fantasy) (Finished)
Replies: 101
Views: 50907

Re: In the Dungeons of the Ice Queen (F/F) (Fantasy) (Part 4 added)

Well, this had to be addressed at some point and I'm glad you did: the gang is a very varied group, from a knight, a thief, an elf, an amazon... at some point they had an inquisitor and a bard. So yeah, those combinations will be seen different from other characters from that world. In this case, th...
by Mineira1986
1 year ago
Forum: Fictional Stories For Everyone
Topic: The Sleepover (F+f/F+f) - Chapter 23 (Apr. 20, 2023) [COMPLETED]
Replies: 32
Views: 23547

Re: The Sleepover (F+f/F+f) - Chapter 20 (Apr. 10, 2023)

There is always... something when it comes down to spanking that looks kind of forbidden. It was established that Sera-Tori relationship was half big sis/baby sis and half mother/daughter, so having Tori spanking a tied up Serafina is definitely... something ;) The ideas are cool. Having some courtr...
by Mineira1986
1 year ago
Forum: Fictional Stories For Everyone
Topic: Spy Camp (m+f+/m+f+) Part 38
Replies: 234
Views: 113285

Re: Spy Camp (m+f+/m+f+) Part 15

Well, Giselle is coming a very slow way. Sure, now she's a bit more willing to engage games, but her attitude is pretty much the same. More like spy camp, it looks like prison camp for her. I had hopes that by this point, she would've found something appealing in the games. My hopes are in the conve...
by Mineira1986
1 year ago
Forum: Fictional Stories For Everyone
Topic: Riders of the Midnight Sun (f+/f+) Chapter 20 Posted 2024-04-08
Replies: 211
Views: 77522

Re: Riders of the Midnight Sun (f+/f+) Chapter 18 + poll Posted 2023-01-14

I'm just going to drop my 2 cents to support my claim that this looks like a dystopian story. While the Happy Trails world looks like it gives the participants a big sense of freedom, which include stealing, assaulting, capturing and even gaining money from the game, I'm gonna go with a false sense ...
by Mineira1986
1 year ago
Forum: Fictional Stories For Everyone
Topic: The Rookie (F/F & M/F) - Epilogue (Mar. 2, 2023) [Story Finished]
Replies: 36
Views: 16948

Re: The Rookie (F/F & M/F) - Chapter 8 (Feb. 24, 2023)

Thanks for the mention [mention]GreyLord[/mention] although all the credit goes to AlexUSA3. I contributed with some minor editing but the premise, scenes and dialogues are all Alex's. This is a beautiful story and I'm glad it found its readers =).
by Mineira1986
1 year ago
Forum: Fictional Stories For Everyone
Topic: Spy Camp (m+f+/m+f+) Part 38
Replies: 234
Views: 113285

Re: Spy Camp (m+f+/m+f+) Part 13

Woohoo! Giselle and her friends (?) are back! Nice chapter. Although it seems Giselle's aversion for the ropes and capture is here to stay. I had hopes that she would eventually and slowly start to care for them, but she seems reluctant. Anyway, it's nice to see this story continuing, even if the ch...
by Mineira1986
1 year ago
Forum: Fictional Stories For Everyone
Topic: Riders of the Midnight Sun (f+/f+) Chapter 20 Posted 2024-04-08
Replies: 211
Views: 77522

Re: Riders of the Midnight Sun (f+/f+) Chapter 18 + poll Posted 2023-01-14

Yet another plot twist to the votes :mrgreen:
Mineira1986 wrote: 1 year ago But if it comes down to a tiebreaker, please consider my vote por Shy Sarah.
by Mineira1986
1 year ago
Forum: Fictional Stories For Everyone
Topic: The Rookie (F/F & M/F) - Epilogue (Mar. 2, 2023) [Story Finished]
Replies: 36
Views: 16948

Re: The Rookie (F/F & M/F) - Chapter 4 (Jan. 27, 2023)

I'm glad I could help the making of this story. Just a little thing: on a second read, the starting sequence makes Dave look bad. The "don't read it" is usually an incentive to read it, and after Courtney clearly read it and lies about it, he goes with "You're not lying, I can tell th...