Stories of Tie Up Games

Well, Louise Williams strikes me not as cold hearted villain. She seems to know, that small favors make easier for both sides, captors and captives alike. Actually it is really clever. I must give her that. One Scene I like, when Christina Rihannon and Jo check in. I can imagine how Eric feels insec...

So, some progress has been made. That´s good news, for sure. Every now and then, an old fashinoned piece of good luck is in order :D Meeting Jo, and cracking the laptop that is definitely good. Very plausible is the end of this chapter: Hayleys frustration is only to understandble. No chance of esca...

Maybe Joanne will have some useful Information and Rihannons IT-Guy will crack Martinez' Laptop. So far Christina and the others do not have any clue, where to look after their friends. I do not know many stories, which fascinated me so much. Every day, I wait for the next chapter. Press the refresh...

Well, that was a close call. The whole rescue Mission would have been jeopardized, if Jo had not rescued Christina. Her escape must infuriate Crawford - and now the rescue Party will be able to make real progress. This setback is well deserved: I'm very thrilled how the rescue Operation will unfold!

Hayley, Natalie and Gayle are in dire peril. Not to know how long they will be kept captive, what will happen to them, to be dependend on the goodwill of their captors. This dependance must get to them. The description of the Situation, the Connections between the characters. This is very well writt...

One may say, that Natalies escape attempt was ill advised, or foolish. But on the other hand: I understand her. To do something, to gain control - even for a moment. For strong and independent characters like Hayley or Natalie the whole situation must be heavy to bear. Or do you think, this stunt wa...

Fordman wrote: ↑5 years ago I am thoroughly enjoying this story, and it becomes more engrossing with each chapter addition. Can’t wait to read more, thank you iliketights.

Me too! I agree totally!

Some thoughts about Christina. At first I disliked her very much, after the first two parts of the series. But in Part 3 my Sympathies grew. Hers was a though choice to make. To choose between her sister and Hayley, or being made to choose by Liz Crawford and her Cronies. Who knows, what we would ha...

Awesome! I totally agree. Nice change of scenery. I enjoyed the twist and unexpected turns of the heist. Christina was quick on the uptake and had a good grasp of the situation at hand. A piece of luck did not hurt either. Let us hope, they hit pay dirt and found something. I did enjoy this chapter...

Imagine the psychology at work here: The Girls come home from the walk outside, refreshed, elated maybe, their spirits raised - and then stands Louise there and bringing them back to reality with a bang. Out of the dresses, back in suits and sleeping bags again.

Many thanks for continuing the Story! I'm curious, what Courtneys Captors will do next. Capture Sarah as well? How will Sarah reach? Good work!

The strategy of their captors is obvious: To subdue them, to demoralize the girls. To show them, there is no chsnce of escape what so ever. So I find it remarkable, Hayley and Natalie manage to keep their cool. But even they are struggling. Gayle shows signs of Resignation. Which is absolutely plaus...

The remarks of Louise at the end are so typical: First the reward, than the reminder who is in controll. The proverbial Stick and Carrot And Yelena enjoys the chloroform way to much.

You are the Master of Cliffhangers! Well done!

Fine start!

Nice cliffhanger at the end of chapter 4! I think, Ruby is in proverbial doghouse. Can't wait for the next part. Good work!

Thank you for posting the next part :) My favourite sequence in this part are the two conversations between Hayley, Gayle and Natalie. The two detectives trying to keep morale up, even if the situation is difficult. One thing I don't understand in the dialogue between Crawford and Hayley, but maybe ...

Very nice!

I'll be glad to read it

Many multipart Stories have a problem: Sometimes they have no end at all - and sometimes the structure is lacking. Nothing Personal on the contrary is perfect. Every piece falls into place. That is quite a Feature for so long a story.

Intriguing!

Think of it! How frustrating this must be for Haley, Natalie and Gayle? No Chance of escape what so ever. The restraining System is foulproof - and Crawford does not leave anything to chances. And so the Ladies have to hope for a wonder - with a little help from friends ;) Let us hope, they will get...

I like the short Dialogue between Natalie and Gayle after Haley was carted of to Crawford. It shows how difficult it is to keep morale up in this situation. No chance für escape. Not knowing what the Future will bring. The doubt, on the verge of dispair. Good work!

Lizzie is an absolute bitch. She reminds me of Dolores Umbrige - well Crawford is prettier, I have to admitt. Poor Haley ......

I read correctly? A second attempt? That sounds like music to my ears:)