Stories of Tie Up Games

Incredibly dense chapter. Lots of locations, characters acting. And the young ones showing their mettle again. I repeat myself: You do a great job in developing the young ones. Chapeau!

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your a brilliant writer mate thanks for sharing Thank you for the Compliment. I do my best. More is to come. The next story will be "Tying the knot" - Kirsty´s and Hayley´s Wedding. If all works out as planned a first draft might be complete End of the Week. The Wedding will take place at...

The Entry is promising. It serves its purpose perfectly: Setting the Stage.

Just stumbled over this tale of @LunaDog - a dystopian world it is no doubt about that, a dark one - but a fascinating one too. Do carry on pretty please

excellent! If it were the end, I would surely miss the setting and all. But it would be a god, if not perfect end, to that awesome tale! Superb, epic job! Now, bring on the movie! :D Thank you! By the way another Hallmark is not far .. we are nearing the 400.000 Views! Progress on Hayley´s and Kirs...

Very nice chapter!

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Excellent tale - the Dreams, the Visions. Very intriguing tale.

Absolutely enjoyable! Katie captured by Abby and Abby captured in return was a very nice turn of events!

This Chapter has its focus on Kim - and we learn - again - what she is capable off. Most illuminating the Name she choses for the new Territory: Peace. One Word. That says it all.

I am amazed. And totally baffled. This tale is nearing another benchmark. The 600000 Views are not far away!

Expect the last Part of the Funeral at Easter Monday at the latest!

Thank you @slackywacky - for me Details are important. They add "Colour" so to speak. In some ways they are like the colour Range of a Painter. They make it easier to create Pictures in the Reader's Minds.

@Caesar73 - I know that you will look after Hayley and Kirsty and do them justice on their big day! Another great story here and no doubt more to come. Thank you - I will do my very best to make Hayley´s and Kirsty´s big day special :) It will no doubt be three interesting and exciting three Days :...

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There seems to be a navigational Problem. Hopefully it can be solved in time. Liked the Despute between Lou and her Mate. Also excellent: The first Third of the Chapter. How the Medico handled the Situation was excellent. Well done @GreyLord !!

A lovely read. Again. However, I admit I was expecting a trap like "You are going to be a companion for Ankh-sun-Amun's journey to the West" and down goes the shutters (as it happened to Joan Collins, btw.). Nice Idea :) I know the Movie you are referring to - love it! There will be sever...

wolfman wrote: ↑1 month ago I will try to keep the surprises coming, to keep both the characters and the readers on their toes.

You do that I am sure of it! Keep it coming!

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LunaDog wrote: ↑1 month ago Anna can't seem to keep herself out of trouble, it appears. Thank God the 'cavalry' arrived in time!

No, Anna has a habit to get into trouble. But thankfully Merit was quick on the uptake. Exspect the second Part of the Funeral either today or tomorrow at the latest. It will be a solemn affair.

I do like this continuation. Graeme is Areal piece of work. That the Judge was lenient is a good Thing. NYow I am looking forward to the next part ....

But no worries, we'll wait. Maybe not patiently, but we'll wait :lol: Thanky you slackywacky - writing the Wedding I had to do something which I normally do not need to do: Writing a list of Characters so I do not forget anybody. What I can tell you though: The first Chapters are finished - as in t...

Smythdean wrote: ↑1 month ago @Detective-Gag
What a great story. Your writing is amazing

Looking forward to more

Agreed! Looking forward to the next Part!