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by laz
1 year ago
Forum: Fictional Stories For Adults
Topic: A Voluntary Kidnapping (M/F)
Replies: 18
Views: 14725

Re: A Voluntary Kidnapping (M/F)

nice start, write the tale for yourself but I hope it remains M/F only.
by laz
1 year ago
Forum: Fictional Stories For Adults
Topic: Charity Night Gone Wrong (?/FFFF) Part Six
Replies: 35
Views: 15674

Re: Charity Night Gone Wrong (?/FFFF) Part Three

great chapter and a great story well done
by laz
1 year ago
Forum: Fictional Stories For Adults
Topic: The Bandit Scout on Newhome (M+F+/M+F+) primarily (M/F) - Chapter 91 - 05/12/24
Replies: 705
Views: 396333

Re: The Bandit Scout on Newhome (M+F+/M+F+) - Chapter 55 - 05/05/23

the dialog between Rita and Frank is great, the bondage is realistic and well conceived, well done. You just keep getting better and better at storytelling. The overall chapter is excellent as well. I only have two thumbs so two thumbs up.
by laz
1 year ago
Forum: Fictional Stories For Everyone
Topic: Ms. Hogan’s Tape Detention (m/F) Part 18 Added 5/7
Replies: 112
Views: 42981

Re: Ms. Hogan’s Tape Detention (m/F) Part Nine Added

part nine is a great chapter, I think it is your best work to date. @TapeTurtle well done
by laz
1 year ago
Forum: Fictional Stories For Everyone
Topic: Ms. Hogan’s Tape Detention (m/F) Part 18 Added 5/7
Replies: 112
Views: 42981

Re: Ms. Hogan’s Tape Detention (m/F) Part Eight Added

Needs revenge where she turns the tables on him, she ties and gags her student, becomes a F/m story. You are writing the story for yourself, 1st and foremost and it's your story @TapeTurtle. You can write it how you want too but if it turns into yet another revenge story [there are way too many her...
by laz
1 year ago
Forum: Fictional Stories For Adults
Topic: The Devil Dog and the Cat Burglar (M/F)
Replies: 28
Views: 12539

Re: the Devil Dog and the Cat Burglar (M/F)

great start, looking forward to more chapters.
by laz
1 year ago
Forum: Fictional Stories For Adults
Topic: The Bandit Scout on Newhome (M+F+/M+F+) primarily (M/F) - Chapter 91 - 05/12/24
Replies: 705
Views: 396333

Re: The Bandit Scout on Newhome (M+F+/M+F+) - Chapter 54 - 04/30/23

This is fiction at it's best, in these last two chapters the interaction between the men and women along with the realistic bondage is so believable. well written. well done.
by laz
1 year ago
Forum: Fictional Stories For Everyone
Topic: Spy Camp (m+f+/m+f+) Part 39
Replies: 237
Views: 115965

Re: Spy Camp (m+f+/m+f+) Part 18

another great chapter
by laz
1 year ago
Forum: Fictional Stories For Everyone
Topic: The games that we play. Part 14 added, (9/5) m/fffff
Replies: 188
Views: 151511

Re: The games that we play. Part 3 added (26/4) m/fffff

Great chapter. What a great payback tie with the wrists and elbows tied that way, the arms are "locked" straight which makes it hard to struggle and reach any knots even without being attached to the crotch rope. "Which is why, rope one, had indeed found it’s way around my sisters wri...
by laz
1 year ago
Forum: Fictional Stories For Adults
Topic: The Bandit Scout on Newhome (M+F+/M+F+) primarily (M/F) - Chapter 91 - 05/12/24
Replies: 705
Views: 396333

Re: The Bandit Scout on Newhome (M+F+/M+F+) - Chapter 53 - 04/25/23

Another well written chapter. The two couples seem to be on the same page regarding transgressions and punishments.
by laz
1 year ago
Forum: Fictional Stories For Everyone
Topic: The games that we play. Part 14 added, (9/5) m/fffff
Replies: 188
Views: 151511

Re: New release, The games that we play. Part 2 added (22/4) m/fffff

Did I miss part three? :D is this thing on, hello, hello? :D
by laz
1 year ago
Forum: Fictional Stories For Adults
Topic: The Unlikely Savior (M+/F) - Chapter 6 - 04/24/23 - Story Completed
Replies: 39
Views: 18232

Re: The Unlikely Savior (M+/F) - Chapter 6 - 04/24/23 - Story Completed

another great chapter and ending to a great story. My favorite lines from this chapter: "After spreading the blanket on the ground, I fixed our plates with fried chicken, potato salad, bread, and butter. I had grapes for dessert and a bottle of good wine. Yes, I know we are too young. But we we...