Stories of Tie Up Games

I hope it is not too annoying (I will tone it down in later chapters, but I had to set a tone in the first part). Not for me =). Good chapter! Giselle discovers right away the result of losing the mission. It raises the stakes right away. I know she won't know the names of the counselors or the oth...

Nice! As much as I would have loved seen Sweet Becky being delivered to Lady Maybelle as she hopelessly tried to escape, it would have reduced the tension in the story. And the most realistic way (even in fiction) for her to be "rescued" was if a third party was involved. Nicely done! I'm ...

Houston we have a problem :) actually two: Number one: Obviously Stephanie listened in to all conversations till Janice put a stop to that, that may pose a problem primarily for Karissa .... Number two: Janice, Floria and Camille are locked in Very intriguing! Thanks for the reply. Yes, Karissa is ...

Oh boy. Good chapter! I was expecting just some kind of vanilla chapter where the protagonists look into Al-Mansur's place, find a crazy document or artifact and then return to their HQ to talk about it. Wasn't expecting the bomb at all! Nice pacing by the way. Short, quick sentences after the tensi...

IKind of funny things turned out that way, because when I first conceived of Sweet Becky, her only role in the story was to get beat up by Shy Sarah. I thought it would be fun to tell it from her point of view, then switch to someone else (wasn't sure who). But then I realized that introducing the ...

Wow!

That's something I would love to write (but I don't have much time sadly) or read. Sounds awesome!

[mention]Mineira1986[/mention] I am glad to hear that you recovered. To the new chapter: Just the cliffs notes version, more detail later. Interesting to see Janices inner struggle. That was nicely done. Also extremly well written Camille´s explosion and Janice´s attempts to calm her down. Also int...

Good chapter! It's always nice to see the aftermath of a big event like the girls experimented the previous night. Also good to see Anna is still angry. That's kind of what I was expecting: Anna needs to be shown as emotional, not just told. The Russian swearing was a very nice touch. Additionally, ...

Nice story! Like it was said before, don't feel discouraged by the lack of replies. Sadly, it's what usually happens on this site. Unless there is a lot of bondage happening since chapter 1, most readers don't follow the stories. And even then, if there is no constant bondage, some readers won't rep...

Well described chapter, specially the rescuing and untying of the captives. You took your time to describe each detail and the result was very good. This comes as a personal preference of mine, but I was hoping for a more, big emotional response from Anna. We've been told several times that she's an...

Great stuff.

Interesting choice for the protagonist. Most stories would include somebody who is eager and excited to start the games, but Giselle is kind of bored and completely oblivious to the games and potential punishments. Really excited to read what's next.

Great presentation for the new villain in town! (Not so secretly I'm hoping that "the master" is not von Winterfeldt). She came, saw and conquered. And she gives me some Dark Lady's vibes, especially the part where she plays with her food. They way she taunts Christine and Anna, knowing th...

Wow, sorry for the long wait. I got sick (Covid, actually), so it was a pretty rough week for me. Now I'm out of the woods, luckily. So Karissa is up to her older ways - and you are wright [mention]Mineira1986[/mention] - it is understandable from her point of view. Janice is in a difficult situatio...

First of all, I need to take this off my chest: The conversation between Anna and Esposito seems too convenient for the plot. As for my knowledge of the NYPD (thanks, Brooklyn 99), Kate Beckett is the captain of one of the many precincts of New York, meaning that any other cop of any other precinct ...

Mmm... not a big fan of von Winterfeldt's return. I was hoping for another villain, because Carl von Winterfeldt, in his prime, with his hands intacts and all his resources, wasn't a match for Christine by a big difference. The idea of hurting what Christine cares most is interesting, though. Not su...

I missed my own deadline by a little! Thanks a lot for your comments [mention]GreyLord[/mention] , [mention]Caesar73[/mention] and also [mention]ninterz[/mention] who commented quite some before I retake this story (Also thanks to everybody who commented and followed this story as well). Here is the...

So Karissa is back to her old ways. It seems she is a slow learner: Having her revenge at Floria and Camilla is obviously more important to her than dealing with Stephanie. And we should not forget, that Karissa was partly responsible for what happened to herself .... Thanks for replying. From Kari...

Nice chapter. Very realistic. Anna and Kate arrive and assume things could have gone wrong, until they find out it was the Dark Lady involved. The conversation changes from being in alert mode, to soothing their bound friend and then to the plans for the rest of the day, in a very natural and believ...

Time for the final chapter! Or not so quite... There is also an epilogue that I'll be posting tomorrow, heh. But technically, this is the final chapter. Enjoy! Part 36 “There is no way I’m telling you my password.” Monica protested. “Just untie my hands and I’ll type it myself.” “Look…” Alexandra sa...

Alright! Thanks [mention]GreyLord[/mention] and [mention]Caesar73[/mention] for your replies! =) Part 35 “This ends here and now.” Monica said. We had decided not to move the location for the final meeting. Chaina had been left in a corner in a room. Still tied and gagged, but not blindfolded or dea...

Nice! I still find a little weird how some characters think in times of distress, like "if my friends don't come soon, I'll go mad", when under those circumstances, most people would phrase it as "I'm going mad! Hope my friends come soon!". Like, being tied and tortured doesn't a...

Phew, it's been almost FIVE months. Deep apologizes to everyone who wanted to see this story finish. I had little time to write and mainly focused on my other story =(. Finding time to write both was hard. Anyway, I've finished the story and we are only three chapters away (plus an epilogue). There ...

Looking forward to the sequel.

If I may, one suggestion: I'd include the link to the first story in the summary, so new readers can find it more easily (or anyone who want to relive the first adventure).

Part 25: PRESENT DAY “Ready?” Janice nodded. Her jaws tightened as a feeble attempt to stop her head from shaking. Karissa opened the door to Floria’s bedroom and both girls entered. Karissa’s right hand searched the light switch. Her fingers found it and she turned on the lights. The bed was a mes...

That was quite the interessting chapter; Janice Conversation with Karissa was a bit onesided at the beginning. Understanding Gag Talk can be quite the challenge :) That Karissa was mightily pissed off should have not surprised Janice - but she managed to find common ground with Karissa in the End. ...