Stories of Tie Up Games

Tie_me_up91 wrote: ↑1 year ago This story just gets better and better! Thank you for continuing, you write it so well.

Thank you so much! I'm glad you're enjoying it, the next part should be up this weekend

I actually like that you've struck a different tone in this chapter, I think it makes things feel more realistic, and makes the characters involved more relatable. One thing that I think you've done really well throughout is establish how each club member has a distinct set of interests and reasons ...

That was a really fun story, I enjoyed the twist in the last chapter, and I think leaving it open ended like that suits the story. I'll definitely be keeping an eye out for whatever you write next!

Woo Hoo!!! Very excited to have this story back. I'm always interested in story telling that plays with perspective and linear structure and I love the ambition of what you're doing here. More than that, as far as the actual tie up games go....I like the way you use relationships and dynamics to he...

Thanks to everyone who has given feedback on the story so far, I do really appreciate it! It's been a while since I updated this, since I was fairly conflicted on where to go with the story next, but I've come back to it and have a much clearer idea going forward now. I want to try and post chapters...

Great chapter, as always. I'm glad to see the return of Abbie, I can see her beginning to trust Trent more with each encounter, which is interesting to see given how she has come to expect ruthlessness from the other players so far. Looking forward to the next part!

Really enjoyed that chapter, it was interesting to see how Elisa has earned her reputation as an escape artist. What I'm really enjoying about this is how you've added a lot of depth to what is a very simple game - all of the characters appear to have their own thoughts and agendas - which we're sta...

Really cool story! I love the concept, very suspenseful

Nice part, looking forward to seeing how the ambush plays out from here! I wonder if we'll find out where Dale got his intel from at some point as well

Thanks [mention]boundfunrp[/mention], glad you enjoyed it!

Excellent start, it's very well written, and plenty of tension throughout! Looks like Simon is in plenty of trouble, but I guess we'll see what happens next

Another excellent chapter, your descriptions and dialogue are really top notch and it's making for a very immersive read! I said this before, but Jackie is a great character, and from we've learnt in this latest chapter I'm looking forward to seeing more of her and Dale, and Abbie too for that matte...

Really enjoyed this part, Jackie is already a really interesting character and I like how you've given everyone we've met so far distinct personalities. Hearing about the history of the club, and how the different members know each other was fun to read about too, I think you've set up lots of inter...

Another great part! It's good to see another character introduced properly, even though Erica has been mentioned a few times before now, I think she'll be an interesting addition to the dynamic. I can understand why Trent has been mostly fixated on Elisa so far, but I do wonder if this latest develo...

I've caught up on the last few chapters, excellent stuff. I really like what you're doing with these characters, it's keeping things unpredictable and engaging to read. The dialogue is spot on as well, makes the characters feel more lifelike I'm really looking forward to the next part! Thank you ve...

I've caught up on the last few chapters, excellent stuff. I really like what you're doing with these characters, it's keeping things unpredictable and engaging to read. The dialogue is spot on as well, makes the characters feel more lifelike

I'm really looking forward to the next part!

Another great part, I'm interested to see how the revenge against Elisa will go. Take your time with the next part, you've already provided us with a lot in a short space of time, so if it's a longer wait for the next part I don't mind. Whenever it's ready I look forward to reading it though!

Loved the latest parts! The story is shaping up nicely, will be interesting to see just how Abbie fits into things

Sounds like you had a lot of fun together! Looking forward to reading the second part

Really enjoyed that, an interesting take on a classic scenario. Definitely interested in finding out more about the motive for the robbery though!

Great start! I like that it's a bit of a slow burn, I think that the story so far is very intriguing, will be interesting to see how these characters develop

Fun start to the story! Take your time of course, but looking forward to part 2!

Finally got around to catching up on this - really fantastically written as always, I'm enjoying the dynamic a lot and I would love to see this continued!

This is definitely something I like to imagine, would be fun to play out with someone (consensually, of course)

Just got around to reading this one, really fun stuff - I loved the playful dynamic between the characters especially!