Stories of Tie Up Games

Great start to this chapter - Courtney definitely seems like someone not to be messed with! I love the added aspect of there being an audience this time; it's going to be fascinating to see not only how this affects Trent - who so far seems like someone who cares how he is seen by others - but also ...

[mention]Fandango[/mention] Thank you so much for the feedback, it means a lot to me! I feel like it's high praise coming from you as well, since your own work is so good. I'm really glad that you're enjoying the narrative here, especially the dynamic between the protagonist and Louise, I'm doing my...

This is a very interesting turn of events! I guess time will tell if Brendan has made the right choice or not, but it doesn't sound like things are going to be easy for him. I feel like there's more than meets the eye with a lot of your characters, and I think that definitely applies to the girls yo...

This is headed in a nice direction, I like the fact that Bella now faces a bit of a dilemma in terms of what to do next

Great update, I love the internal conflict going on in the protagonist's head at times! As for the ending, I'm not sure which I'd prefer, I'm sure either will be good! If you're really torn between the two, then you could write both and use one as an 'alternate' ending? Just a suggestion though, it'...

Part 11 December 2018 Earlier, Louise and Rachel’s decision to ignore me while bound and gagged had been frustrating, but I would happily trade my current predicament for that, if it gave me a reprieve from the damned ice. Almost as soon as Louise lets go of the cubes, depositing them inside my und...

Awesome story! I love the way that you built the suspense gradually throughout, it made the climax all the more satisfying and shocking (in a good way, of course)

I like the way this story is going, it's going to be interesting to see how far Bella is willing to go to get her story!

A great conclusion to the chapter, you have a way of making the reader feel like they are really in the room with the characters, which is impressive. I'm sure that Courtney's payback will be just as enjoyable to read about!

Fandango wrote: ↑1 year ago I was fucking besotted with this girl.

Can't say I blame him for that!

Nice conclusion to the first chapter! Lexi's plan clearly went about as well as it could have done, and it was very enjoyable to read. Seeing the roles reverse will be interesting too, though I imagine things won't always run as smoothly. Also, knowing that each chapter is going to be from a differe...

Great update, though I felt bad for Courtney when she explained what happened to her - it's almost impressive how Elisa is managing to give almost everyone a reason to want some payback. The action in the present is great as well, I especially enjoyed how Courtney's tape gag was described. It will b...

I really liked how the unique setting came to life in the latest part, it's nice to see the escape room aspect of it be involved in the narrative, rather than just being a backdrop. Also really interesting to see it play out from Drew's perspective, where he is able to see everything that is going o...

Courtney is a very interesting addition - you have a way of writing your characters that makes me want to learn more about them from the get go. And in this case, finding out what Courtney's 'additional expectations' are is a great hook. Looking forward to the next part!

Things are definitely hotting up between these two! I get the feeling that things aren't going to go according to plan when the game begins however. Awesome work as always, I especially enjoyed how Drew put his foot down and asserted himself more towards the end, that was wonderfully described

A fun take on the gym setting, I really enjoyed that! The attention to detail really brought it to life for me

Nice setup for the rest of the chapter, will be interesting to see what Courtney brings to the table when she is introduced!

Nice story, I think the characters come across as authentic and relatable, and I like the ambiguity you've added to the protagonist's gender, it's a refreshing choice. Thanks for sharing!

A very intriguing start, I really like the premise of having each chapter from a different character's perspective. I like a good escape room as well, so I like the fact that one is being used as the backdrop for this story. Based on what you've told us so far, it sounds like things will soon get ou...

Great to see how things went between Jackie and Dale in more detail, the way you described it was fantastic! I'm looking to seeing the next few chapters based on what you've teased about them, as well as your new story, which sounds very intriguing. I really appreciate the effort that you've put int...

That was one of my favourite parts yet, which is saying something because you've set the bar very high throughout! Obviously it's great that the plan worked for Jackie and Dale, I wonder how the overall dynamic is going to change from here. The descriptions of how they were tied together were fantas...

Great stuff, love the playful tone you have going on here, keep it up!

[mention]Fandango[/mention] Thank you so much for the detailed feedback! I'm really glad that you're continuing to enjoy this, and it's great to hear your insight into some of the specific parts. I enjoy the implication that she's just as anxious and apprehensive and flying by the seat of her pants ...

Loved this part, Elisa's predicament was excellent, and really well described. The ante is clearly being upped with some of these tie ups now, and I can't imagine anyone is going to tone it down anytime soon, especially Elisa! I think Trent is definitely playing a risky game by getting involved in s...

Part 10 January 2015 “Miles, as much as you want to be active, there are plenty of reasons why we can’t go skiing.” Rosie’s voice chimes in diplomatically while my friend sips his coffee. I take a drink of my own, wincing slightly as the fluid almost scalds my tongue. I’m grateful for the warmth th...

Really enjoyed that part, I think all of three of them might come of this slightly different in some way, but I do wonder whether Trent will regret unleashing this side of Abbie (although I think she's had to wait long enough for her revenge now). Up to now, it seems like Elisa has been able to do w...