Stories of Tie Up Games

Have no fear. You are writing a tale worthy of support. This was an exciting chapter.

Freya continues to impress me. Stopping to render the ropes unusable is not something that would have occurred to me in her situation. Having said that, I'm kind of sad that they will now be unable to bind her again. How is it I find myself rooting for both a captive and her captors at the same tim...

With THIS you can continue Revelation for a long time [mention]wolfman[/mention]. Or make it the foundation for your next story. I am sure that whatever you choose will be best. Great tale.

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Where indeed, [mention]Caesar73[/mention] . I am sure that I speak for all of your readers when I say that we are looking forward to Part Two. I will make no guesses as to what may happen. The possibilities are too limitless. Fantastic story.

You have not bothered me with the tense issue. Whatever problem that may cause is certainly overwhelmed by the rich environment of the story and the wonderful tugs.

Wendy has more going for herself than she realizes. Is she going to withdraw her resignation and move to marketing?

Indeed, Go Freya!

No! I do not believe that Jim killed Agent Church. Jim is much too dedicated to life.

Possibly there is some hope that Christine or Anna can achieve their freedom now that the mittens and hogties have been removed. Have to wonder why Kate was not treated the same. Thirsting for more.

This was a very exciting chapter, thank you very much. We need more options to continue this scene. Accordingly, for now, option B.

An easy start, perhaps. But the long haul on this contest is fearsome to contemplate. Although there is no way that I could stay stay awake 24 hours, even for an event as exciting as this, I would pay a pretty penny for a ticket to watch.

Wonderful chapter. Our three heroines are in a terrible fix. Their bondage appears to be quite inescapable. Must something happen from the outside for them to win their freedom?

@caesar73, @slackywacky, and @notseen have eloquently described this last chapter. A thank you to them. I would just add that you are displaying scholarship in your knowledge of southeast Asia.

Okay, you have caught my attention. Well formulated beginning that is moving right along.

Thank you for your earlier clarification @caesar73. Your story is moving along. In this complex world you are creating, you have so many options. It is going to continue to be pleasure to follow your writing. Just from the gorgeous models you have selected to represent your characters it is obvious ...

Option B would be splendid.

Have I missed something important? It almost seems as if Anna is not surprised at the Dark Lady's presence and is not upset at all at finding herself under the Dark Lady's power. Wonderfully complex story!

Such excellent writing. As I read, it felt as if I were there with the Dark Lady binding and gagging Christina. Where will you go from this point? It seems as if your options are without bounds. Great work!

For once I am mainstream.

Option A

Elsa with her bubbly personality and her bubbly body remains my all time favorite character. Waiting with enthusiasm for the next installment of your great story.

You just have to love Freya. She will take a break for a little bit. Then she is back looking for an opportunity. Can't say she will find one. But she is looking.

Jim has the man in the white suite right where he wants him. What will all of Jim's efforts produce now?

The aliens are happy! Danny should be happy.

Caesar wrote:The aliens surely must be happy, I am Good work!

So Caesar is happy. We are all happy.

This is a happy story.

I can't guess where you are going with this. Enjoying it very much. Wonderful turn of events.