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by lochness
1 year ago
Forum: Fictional Stories For Everyone
Topic: A entitlement aunt. F/ff
Replies: 12
Views: 7796

Re: A entitlement aunt. F/ff

Druid_Princess wrote: 1 year ago
lochness wrote: 1 year ago Nickelback t-shirt. Seriously?
Nickelback is awesome. Fight me ;)
Try another Canadian band, Rush.
by lochness
1 year ago
Forum: Fictional Stories For Everyone
Topic: A entitlement aunt. F/ff
Replies: 12
Views: 7796

Re: A entitlement aunt. F/ff

Nickelback t-shirt. Seriously?
by lochness
2 years ago
Forum: Fictional Stories For Everyone
Topic: Jay's Reception (MFm/MFmf)
Replies: 4
Views: 5836

Re: Jay's Reception (MFm/MFmf)

I tried to imagine Mrs. McPhee's Scottish accent, but all I hear is John Hannah's voice or: "Voice recoginition? In a lift? In Scotland?"
by lochness
3 years ago
Forum: True Stories For Everyone
Topic: Jennifer's Desire. F/F
Replies: 9
Views: 16358

Re: Jennifer's Desire. F/F

"Tell me, what do you truly desire?"
by lochness
3 years ago
Forum: Fictional Stories For Adults
Topic: Devastation - A sequel to Devotion (M/F) (M/M) Complete
Replies: 147
Views: 88982

Re: Devastation - A sequel to Devotion (M/F)

An excellent ending. For a reason I can't explain, I saw Steve looking just like Steve McGarrett. Except that he is not even near as romantic as Steve Marks.
by lochness
3 years ago
Forum: Fictional Stories For Adults
Topic: Devastation - A sequel to Devotion (M/F) (M/M) Complete
Replies: 147
Views: 88982

Re: Devastation - A sequel to Devotion (M/F)

I was thinking that the person watching from the shadows is just making sure Louise and Steve are fine and well. And then just disappears.

Thank you for the wedding on a beach.
by lochness
3 years ago
Forum: Fictional Stories For Adults
Topic: Hitchhiker (M/F, some F/F)
Replies: 1161
Views: 733343

Re: Hitchhiker (M/F, some F/F)

What if Mandy's dad is a guy who wears t-shirts like this?

If he does, Jack is fucked.
by lochness
3 years ago
Forum: Fictional Stories For Adults
Topic: Hitchhiker (M/F, some F/F)
Replies: 1161
Views: 733343

Re: Hitchhiker (M/F, some F/F)

I love the playful tone of this tale. So much fun and the characters all have an easy chemistry which never seems forced or artificial. "Oh crap, my dad." Well that is a sentence to inspire dread if ever there was one. Good Luck talking your way out of this one. All Jack needs to say is &...
by lochness
3 years ago
Forum: Fictional Stories For Adults
Topic: Hitchhiker (M/F, some F/F)
Replies: 1161
Views: 733343

Re: Hitchhiker (M/F, some F/F)

I love the playful tone of this tale. So much fun and the characters all have an easy chemistry which never seems forced or artificial. "Oh crap, my dad." Well that is a sentence to inspire dread if ever there was one. Good Luck talking your way out of this one. All Jack needs to say is &...
by lochness
3 years ago
Forum: Fictional Stories For Adults
Topic: Hitchhiker (M/F, some F/F)
Replies: 1161
Views: 733343

Re: Hitchhiker (M/F, some F/F)

Bishop. From now on, when I think about your character, I see Lance Henriksen.
by lochness
3 years ago
Forum: Fictional Stories For Adults
Topic: Devastation - A sequel to Devotion (M/F) (M/M) Complete
Replies: 147
Views: 88982

Re: Devastation - A sequel to Devotion (M/F)

I am beginning to see touch of Dan Brown in this story.
by lochness
3 years ago
Forum: Fictional Stories For Adults
Topic: Devastation - A sequel to Devotion (M/F) (M/M) Complete
Replies: 147
Views: 88982

Re: Devastation - A sequel to Devotion (M/F)

Excellent writing so far! I like how you depict and describe the police procedures. I am quite interested in british police tactics and procedures. I thank and bow.
by lochness
3 years ago
Forum: Fictional Stories For Adults
Topic: Hitchhiker (M/F, some F/F)
Replies: 1161
Views: 733343

Re: Hitchhiker (M/F)

Thanks, Slackywacky! I'm glad, you like the Idea :) It would be interessting how Jack and Elsa explain the Situation - without getting in trouble :) Couldn't you both just pull a Nixon lol deny deny deny. If the woman and the man are both saying "no officer, no kidnapping here?" I think t...
by lochness
3 years ago
Forum: Fictional Stories For Adults
Topic: Hitchhiker (M/F, some F/F)
Replies: 1161
Views: 733343

Re: Hitchhiker (M/F)

Holy cow!
by lochness
3 years ago
Forum: Fictional Stories For Adults
Topic: Hitchhiker (M/F, some F/F)
Replies: 1161
Views: 733343

Re: Hitchhiker (M/F)

I actually spent some time googling the places and roads you have mentioned. I like fictional stories being placed in real locations. Good job!
by lochness
3 years ago
Forum: Fictional Stories For Adults
Topic: Hitchhiker (M/F, some F/F)
Replies: 1161
Views: 733343

Re: Hitchhiker (M/F)

I actually spent some time googling the places and roads you have mentioned. I like fictional stories being placed in real locations. Good job!
by lochness
3 years ago
Forum: Fictional Stories For Adults
Topic: Hitchhiker (M/F, some F/F)
Replies: 1161
Views: 733343

Re: Hitchhiker (M/F)

I love all these little details about your truck and where you drive.
by lochness
3 years ago
Forum: Fictional Stories For Adults
Topic: Hitchhiker (M/F, some F/F)
Replies: 1161
Views: 733343

Re: Hitchhiker (M/F)

An excellent story so far. Also, your attention to detail is excellent. Thumbs way up! 👍
by lochness
4 years ago
Forum: Fictional Stories For Adults
Topic: Devotion (M/F) (M/M) - A sequel to Deception (Complete)
Replies: 140
Views: 88749

Re: Devotion (M/F) (M/M) - A sequel to Deception

Caesar73 wrote: 4 years ago Indeed, there is still open business, Helen is still on the loose :) Great Chapter again.
And I want to read about their wedding!
by lochness
4 years ago
Forum: Fictional Stories For Adults
Topic: Devotion (M/F) (M/M) - A sequel to Deception (Complete)
Replies: 140
Views: 88749

Re: Devotion (M/F) (M/M) - A sequel to Deception

For a minute, I saw an image of Lombard in my mind. He looked like Mads Mikkelsen. But, nah... He is no Mads Mikkelsen. Timothy Olyphant?
by lochness
4 years ago
Forum: Fictional Stories For Adults
Topic: Devotion (M/F) (M/M) - A sequel to Deception (Complete)
Replies: 140
Views: 88749

Re: Devotion (M/F) (M/M) - A sequel to Deception

I wonder if Steve's accent sounds like Brad Pitt in Devil's own? Secondly, the sergeant working under DCI Shaw reminded me of one PC Nicholas Angel. His accent is more like James Nesbitt as I see it. It was actually, Shaw who gave the rapid fire instructions, I have edited to clarify. My bad Nice c...
by lochness
4 years ago
Forum: Fictional Stories For Adults
Topic: Devotion (M/F) (M/M) - A sequel to Deception (Complete)
Replies: 140
Views: 88749

Re: Devotion (M/F) (M/M) - A sequel to Deception

I wonder if Steve's accent sounds like Brad Pitt in Devil's own?
Secondly, the sergeant working under DCI Shaw reminded me of one PC Nicholas Angel.