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- 5 years ago
- Forum: Archives for Everyone
- Topic: mrjones2009 : Nothing Personal 3 - Criminal Intent (F/F)
- Replies: 83
- Views: 60922
Re: Nothing Personal 3 - Criminal Intent (F/F)
Lizzie is an absolute bitch. She reminds me of Dolores Umbrige - well Crawford is prettier, I have to admitt. Poor Haley ......
- 5 years ago
- Forum: Fictional Stories For Everyone
- Topic: Teacherknapping (MMMM/F)
- Replies: 35
- Views: 31498
Re: Teacherknapping (MMMM/F)
I read correctly? A second attempt? That sounds like music to my ears:)
- 5 years ago
- Forum: Archives for Everyone
- Topic: mrjones2009 : Nothing Personal 3 - Criminal Intent (F/F)
- Replies: 83
- Views: 60922
Re: Nothing Personal 3 - Criminal Intent (F/F)
Well, and now the rescue Mission is one the way. Let's see how it unfolds Louise Williams is an interessting character. I find her the only villain in this Story, I can in some ways sympathize with. She is not an Uberbitch like Martinez or especially Crawford.
- 5 years ago
- Forum: Fictional Stories For Everyone
- Topic: Teacherknapping (MMMM/F)
- Replies: 35
- Views: 31498
Re: Teacherknapping (MMMM/F)
I like the Idea of an alternative ending
- 5 years ago
- Forum: Archives for Everyone
- Topic: mrjones2009 : Nothing Personal 3 - Criminal Intent (F/F)
- Replies: 83
- Views: 60922
Re: Nothing Personal 3 - Criminal Intent (F/F)
I always wonder about the name of Elizabeth Crawfords Island I think of it as Alcatraz or Chateau d' If of Alexandre Dumas. That leaves only one Question open: Where is Abbe Fariah?
- 5 years ago
- Forum: Fictional Stories For Everyone
- Topic: You Only Sleep Twice (part 8 added 1/13/19) (F/F)
- Replies: 21
- Views: 19358
Re: You Only Sleep Twice (F/F)
Promising first Chapter!
- 5 years ago
- Forum: Fictional Stories For Everyone
- Topic: Carol’s Captive Vacation (F/F)
- Replies: 17
- Views: 20855
Re: Carol’s Captive Vacation (F/F)
I like the interactions of captive and captor. For a future chapter: Maybe a mummification Scene? Carol as Princess, caught by the evil High Priestess, who wants to bury her prey alive, mummifying her first.
- 5 years ago
- Forum: Archives for Everyone
- Topic: mrjones2009 : Nothing Personal 3 - Criminal Intent (F/F)
- Replies: 83
- Views: 60922
Re: Nothing Personal 3 - Criminal Intent (F/F)
I like the insights, we get, of the thoughts and feelings of our heroines. For example: Haleys and Natalies Frustration over the dire situation, they are in. Haleys last thought at the end of this chapter, about getting a fresh diaper, shows this clearly. The Situation must seem hopeless.
- 5 years ago
- Forum: Archives for Everyone
- Topic: mrjones2009 : Nothing Personal 3 - Criminal Intent (F/F)
- Replies: 83
- Views: 60922
Re: Nothing Personal 3 - Criminal Intent (F/F)
I like your style of writing. The Story is thorougly thought through and very well written! Good work!
- 5 years ago
- Forum: Fictional Stories For Everyone
- Topic: The Amazon Assassin (part 4 added) (M+/F)
- Replies: 14
- Views: 16123
Re: The Amazon Assassin (M+/F)
Nice Idea!
- 5 years ago
- Forum: Fictional Stories For Everyone
- Topic: Carol’s Captive Vacation (F/F)
- Replies: 17
- Views: 20855
Re: Carol’s Captive Vacation (F/F)
This first chapter was very promising, light and playful in style. Very good!
- 5 years ago
- Forum: Archives for Everyone
- Topic: mrjones2009 : Nothing Personal 3 - Criminal Intent (F/F)
- Replies: 83
- Views: 60922
Re: Nothing Personal 3 - Criminal Intent (F/F)
Thank you for posting the next part so soon And so I will eagerly wait for the following chapter! Thanks again!
- 5 years ago
- Forum: Fictional Stories For Everyone
- Topic: Teacherknapping (MMMM/F)
- Replies: 35
- Views: 31498
Re: Teacherknapping (MMMM/F)
I agree! I like this Story!
- 5 years ago
- Forum: Archives for Everyone
- Topic: mrjones2009 : Nothing Personal 3 - Criminal Intent (F/F)
- Replies: 83
- Views: 60922
Re: Nothing Personal 3 - Criminal Intent (F/F)
Oh, and I can hardly wait for the next part of this epic saga, even if I know the Story already.
- 5 years ago
- Forum: Fictional Stories For Everyone
- Topic: Home Alone (requested by Egyptianboytoy) (completed) (FF/m, m/FF)
- Replies: 12
- Views: 13652
- 5 years ago
- Forum: Fictional Stories For Everyone
- Topic: Cheerleading Auditions (COMPLETED) (ff/f, f/f)
- Replies: 53
- Views: 43505
Re: Cheerleading Auditions (ff/f, f/f)
Nice one!
- 5 years ago
- Forum: Fictional Stories For Adults
- Topic: The college take over f/multiple f part four added
- Replies: 22
- Views: 21776
Re: The college take over f/multiple f part one
I agree! Cruel and sexy Good writing!
- 5 years ago
- Forum: Archives for Everyone
- Topic: mrjones2009 : Nothing Personal 3 - Criminal Intent (F/F)
- Replies: 83
- Views: 60922
Re: Nothing Personal 3 - Criminal Intent (F/F)
Thank you for posting the next part of this Story!
- 5 years ago
- Forum: Fictional Stories For Everyone
- Topic: Teacherknapping (MMMM/F)
- Replies: 35
- Views: 31498
Re: Teacherknapping (MMMM/F)
Fine Start! I'm looking forward to Part 2!
- 5 years ago
- Forum: Archives for Everyone
- Topic: mrjones2009 : Nothing Personal 3 - Criminal Intent (F/F)
- Replies: 83
- Views: 60922
Re: Nothing Personal 3 - Criminal Intent (F/F)
Me too Poor Haley!
- 5 years ago
- Forum: Archives for Everyone
- Topic: mrjones2009 : Nothing Personal 3 - Criminal Intent (F/F)
- Replies: 83
- Views: 60922
- 5 years ago
- Forum: Fictional Stories For Adults
- Topic: Thirteen Cents (M/F), parts 1-39
- Replies: 218
- Views: 166842
Re: Thirteen Cents (M/F), parts 1-24
I'm curious what happens next to poor Courtney
- 5 years ago
- Forum: Archives for Everyone
- Topic: mrjones2009 : Nothing Personal 3 - Criminal Intent (F/F)
- Replies: 83
- Views: 60922
Re: Nothing Personal 3 - Criminal Intent (F/F)
Poor Natalie .... the improved restraint system is quite genius. Not for the inhabitant of this contraption though
- 5 years ago
- Forum: Archives for Everyone
- Topic: mrjones2009 : Nothing Personal 3 - Criminal Intent (F/F)
- Replies: 83
- Views: 60922
Re: Nothing Personal 3 - Criminal Intent (F/F)
Natalie is in trouble now .... great!
- 5 years ago
- Forum: Archives for Everyone
- Topic: mrjones2009 : Nothing Personal 3 - Criminal Intent (F/F)
- Replies: 83
- Views: 60922
Re: Nothing Personal 3 - Criminal Intent (F/F)
Very nice! Although I read this Story before, it fascinates me every time