Stories of Tie Up Games

Epilogue I cursed while pushing the cart through the aisle of the supermarket, somehow I'd managed to find the one cart with a broken wheel and every left turn caused a mind jarring squeal to echo through the store. I did not have the patience to get another cart so I gritted my teeth and tried to ...

Chapter 2 - Right Time Kierra slowly walked into the room the smile on her face falling along with the handful of rose petals she collected along the way. Her briefcase and handbag slid to the floor and she brought both her hands to her face covering her mouth and nose. She said nothing just inched...

Thanks all for the comments. Really helps to get my gumption up to write more.

Here's the next, and final, part.

All the best.

Wrong House, Right time Chapter 1 - Wrong House To quote Ferris Bueller, "Life moves pretty fast. If you don't stop and look around once in awhile, you could miss it." I am a 34 year old writer and life does not move fast, so taking the time to look around has never been high on my priori...

Something shorter, something more explicit, a bit different from my usual fare. I needed a change of pace as I am kind of hitting a wall with Jack's Story . It's not an insurmountable obstacle just needed a change of pace.

Here we go.

Chapter 4 - A Bad Bet Mark lounged on the back porch reading a book. The tan lines were nearly invisible now after about two weeks of focused tanning, his skin now a dark brown and the summer had only just started. He was just starting to doze off when the back screen door opened. "Hey Mark, d...

Chapter 52 - April's Turn How can I describe what it was like to be bound to Polly. I could not focus on her eyes we were bound too closely, nose to nose, lip to lip, breath to breath. She shifted constantly for reasons I could not discern. I had given up on my own struggles after just a few minute...

Not enough women like that in the world.

Good story.

A comment about comments. If you want to get a lot of comments on your story, leave it unfinished. If you want a board full of unfinished stories, only leave comments on unfinished stories. The problem is many of the unfinished stories are episodic along the lines of Nancy Drew Novels, etc. Events ...

That's Chapter 3.

A gift for whomever spots the Monty Python reference first.

All the best...

Chapter 3 - Monopoly After a few days, Mark's leg was more than strong enough to stand on. During his recovery he made sure to be resting on the couch when Nancy arrived. She still came over everyday after school and he really enjoyed that time. She seemed to wear a different spandex outfit everyda...

The last two parts involving Jack's 'kidnapping' and continued 'plight' at the hands of April have been fantastic! Glad he got to enjoy some time tying Polly up and now gets some real personal time with her. I also love the idea of Jack doing a kind of TED talk on bondage :D Your story has been so ...

That's a great story, even if the Mum's are a little extreme. Will there be more parts? Yes, there are more parts, I stopped writing it in 2010 so the ending kind of just ends. If there is enough interest I may continue it. It will take me a bit to post because there is quite a bit of editing to do...

Chapter 2 - After the Test Nancy navigated the human jungle that made up the halls of the high school. She was down at the wrong end of the hall for her current grade. As she weaved through the hall looks followed her, many obviously curious why an older student would be here, but most of the guys ...

Thank you for all the comments. Here's Chapter 2.

All the best.

Chapter 1 - Wacky Wednesday There comes a time in all kids lives when they realize that Mom is not just the person that makes dinner and cleans house. For some kids it happens when they first realize the jar of lotion in the nightstand is not for her hands, or perhaps that the short cylindrical obj...

This is a story I wrote for the old site. It was written 2008 or 2009 and I like to think I've improved since then, but you tell me. Either way I'll repost it here. I considered posting in the archives but there is a slight chance I'll finish it. It's a long one but not near the length of Jack's Sto...

Chapter 51 - April "Hello Jack." April spoke with obvious delight in her voice. Though it was a Saturday she was dressed nicely if more comfortably than her usual work attire. She masked her curves with a large T-shirt style dress complemented by black leggings. "I must assume you ha...

Great story.

It feels like maybe there are stories from Mrs. Harris youth. Maybe that's just good writing.

Missed that one thanks for the repost.

Lorddunmore wrote: ↑6 years ago

Londit wrote: ↑6 years ago thanks for this new chapter,I wonder who is this woman !? can't wait to read the next part now

My guess is -- his Math Teacher - Mrs.Bates. But who knows.

Looking forward to the next part as well.

I didn't mean that to be a cliff hangar. It's April Dawson, it's her house after all.

Chapter 50 - Change of Plan Hot. Disoriented. Nauseated In the past I had been bound, even wrapped with plastic wrap, but nothing, absolutely nothing compared with being wrapped as I was inside that suitcase. Compressed into a tight ball by the white wrap my every breath seemed to increase the stra...

Drbooks wrote: ↑6 years ago Great story thus far. any chance of some leotard/swimsuit bondage in future chapters?

I'm with you there, so it's highly likely. Thanks for the comment.

All the best

The dialogue is smooth and believable. It's a good start, and I hope you keep going. I don't really do criticism, writing is tough, even when you're anonymous. My advice and I would give this to anyone, read it outloud to yourself, even if you have to whisper. I always find stuff that sounds off by ...

Chapter 49 - Jack's Birthday "Happy Birthday Jack." I read on my phone. It was a message from Polly. I had been so busy I actually had to confirm with a glance at the date to ensure that it was in fact not my birthday. It was still a month away. "Huh?" I texted back. "Wrong...