GreyLord wrote: ↑1 year ago
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Sasha informed the Colonel the following morning that she was accepting the mission. The tracking device was immediately installed in her shoulder.
Brave girl! But sometimes I wonder if the team is really focussed on the matters why they were sent to the place in the first place...
Well, in my opinion a bold choice of background given the incidents being constantly reported in that area, and we might have an opion but cannot know what is really going on. In war truth was and still is the first victim. So, we should special care not to forget this is a work of fiction. I wonder...
Aaaawwww, a wonderful, wonderful chapter and I can only guess how long this idea had been carried in a mind even before "putting it to paper". Apt choice of music!
Great read!
Hip hip hurray! The full concert? Looking forward to it. It is great to see this story going strong, even in 2023 (yes, I know it is only 38 hours young EST time). We'll wait for the full version on Wednesday. boooom - booooom- ... - booooom! 24 shots (hope it's the right number) for a royal salute...
very hot... and I do not referring to the water-temperature... Hot, indeed! It would be interesting to learn more about Alecto, but I suspect that is not in the cards for our future. But we never know. How did she develop her skills? Where did she get her training? What other adventures has she had...
wow. tough. It's a sin, you know, to serve good wine in a situation the captive need water and nothing else. Alecto shall burn in hell!
But the race was a good read and a fine method to manipulate the captives maybe into a rivalry. The motivation is really a growing question to me, too.
finally caught up - very intense - in the best of senses - read!
A wonderful description of the mystery of bondage, even if the well descripted level of pain and torment is a little beyond my liking. However, there was never danger and so I was appreciating it line by line.
Excellent!
GreyLord wrote: ↑1 year ago
The fiendish Alecto seems to be easily maintaining the upper hand. So far, Kate has had no chance. The mystery deepens with new members added to the plot as part of your cliffhanger. Well done, @Caesar73.
Dear readers all! Thank you for your support and comments, this naturally includes the helpful, constructive critics, too. A special thanks to [mention]Caesar73[/mention] , [mention]slackywacky[/mention] and [mention]BlissfulMisery[/mention] . When I made contact to [mention]GreyLord[/mention] quite...
... I think people often forget how devastating a rifle round is against a human body due to the physics involved, despite the bullet being small. Kind of why the whole notion of shooting for the head is a thing only for movies, there is simply no need, a round to the chest will probably completely...